It's A Long Story- Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Allioss, Aug 8, 2011.

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  1. Allioss. Don't tell us what you're planning.


    Just let us guess. :)
     
    #21 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 8, 2011
  2. Sure can do :p
     
    #22 Allioss, Aug 9, 2011
  3. This is a test
     
    #23 Allioss, Aug 9, 2011
  4. Yay it worked :D
     
    #24 Allioss, Aug 9, 2011
  5. Lol
     
    #25 *TigerstarandJaystar (01), Aug 9, 2011
  6. Like the new chapter! The "Vampire rage" intrigues me, I want to see what you'll do with it later on.
     
    #26 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 9, 2011
  7. My inspiration for the Bloodrage is in Gamers on (popular video site), when Mark the Red goes into a beserker rage. :p
     
    #27 Allioss, Aug 9, 2011
  8. Lol. It's a good thing to implement into your story.
     
    #28 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 9, 2011
  9. Thank you, I can't wait for your story to be posted :)
     
    #29 Allioss, Aug 9, 2011
  10. :) I'm planning on finishing the last two chapters of my first story, and also finishing the first chapter of Defiance tomorrow. I'll probably be putting then at 30minute intervals, in order, Defiance going last.
     
    #30 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 9, 2011
  11. Cool! I look forward to them
     
    #31 Allioss, Aug 9, 2011
  12. It's very good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter 
     
    #32 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 9, 2011
  13. YAY! My character is in!!!! Continue! Amazing story!
     
    #33 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 9, 2011
  14. Yaaaay, I love it 
     
    #34 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 10, 2011
  15. I doodled Poiz's scimi, if you guys want to see it :S
     
    #35 Allioss, Aug 10, 2011
  16. I'd love to see it 
     
    #36 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 10, 2011
  17. [​IMG]
     
    #37 Allioss, Aug 10, 2011
  18. Pretty good! Don't post on story though.. Since we're past that.
     
    #38 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 10, 2011
  19. Ok! Thanks for the feedback Phoenix and Okami :)
     
    #39 Allioss, Aug 10, 2011
  20. Hey! If you want, I can draw some stuff for you!

    Great story, btw. I like the two viewpoints (story character and storyteller)
     
    #40 cheesemuffin, Aug 10, 2011
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