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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Sep 3, 2010.

  1. If you need a hand, you know where to find me.
     
  2. Sometime after I finish my current project I might wrote a story.
     
  3. Story: Dragon Tale
    Author: Utho
    Rating 4 out of 5
    Genre: Fantasy

    Plot: This story is about a few adventurers who end up becoming
    dragon riders. It goes straight to the action, as some people enjoy. I would be anxious to see if utho would put a whole army of demons in it.
     
  4. Can you rate me and fanged story? It is called A twisted fairytale:eek:n the run
     
  5. U haven't rated mine yet called wizardry world
     
  6. Excellent reviews iZaln! Keep it up!
     
  7. Official iRate review

    Twisted Fairy Tale: On the Run
    By Symphoney and FangedWolf
    Rating:
    Genre: Fantasy

    This story is written by two beginners. Unfortunately it is pretty obvious. The organization is a little off, and the nothing is elaborated enough. Though the plot is a little confusing and the description is a little misused, Sym and FW improve every time they write a chapter, and the story continues to improve. Sometimes by small steps and sometimes by leaps and bounds, the story gets better and better. 
    Nice job you two good effort. The more you practice, the better you'll get.
     
  8. Official iRate Review  
    Title: Endgame
    Author: Seth73
    Rating:
    Genre: Futeristic

      Definitely one of my favorite stories on KaW. Seth73, unlike most authors, goes back and edits his own work! For example, one day I was reading a new chapter, when I read, "There weapons were laid out in front of them." I noticed it, but later, as I was scrolling through, I saw that it had been changed to " Their weapons were laid in front of them." Therefore, Endgame hardly has any errors at all! But it's still not perfect. He sometimes rushes explanations, such as, "He got the sword, leather armor, blah blah blah." He needs to fully explain the details, not skipping them. Still, overall, Endgame is a fantastic story and I recommend it to most!
     
  9. Guys I have waited forever for my story to be rated by iRate. W t f. Lol. It is "The Maid of Ycha". Do it or Gnath will get you. Lol.
     
  10. Then Esh will destroy him... Burn
     
  11. Haha do my story! But take it to dinner first....
     
  12. U still didn't do a foot print in the sand!! Please rate it!
     
  13. Hey, Iz? How do you edit, cause I see mistakes in mine, but I can't figure out how to go back and edit them, even on the computer, can you teach me?
     
  14. Post it here zaln. Lol. I'd like to know also.
     
  15. Lady go to iWrite. I will teach you. 
     
  16. To edit, you'll need to be hooked up to the KaW web forums version. Then go to your post and look at the bottom for the edit button. Press and edit. Then resubmit and it's edited :)

    iZ
     
  17. Arimay DarkFalcon did your story. Just bcuz you didn't like the rating doesn't mean it's wrong.
     
  18. I am currently reading maid of ycha for a review...
     
  19. Thank you DF! Lol