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Chapter Nine The foot steps grew closer and closer. I stood up. "Hello? Show yourself!" I tryed to make myself sound brave but I sounded as if I was a tiny mouse squealing for help. The foot steps were stomping on the damp ground now. They were in front of me, to ignore it I looked up towards the lights of the sun trying to shine through the trees I was ready to burst out into tears. "Just do it! Stop making me wait, kill me already!" I screamed, than the stomping stopped. But I could sence it was right in front of me. I shut my eyes closed as tight as I could and bent my head down. I started to think, just open your eyes be brave! Just before you die you can't be a whimp! To my fear I opened them. Starring in front of me was absolutly nothing but a shadow. I waved my arm up, for sure this wasn't mine. It stood there fat and blump breathing. That's it, it's going to kill me I thought. "Your wrong." It said to me starring at it's mouth moving. For sure this couldn't read my mind right? "I can, and before you ask me anymore questions let me explain it all." I was scared to death now, but I had to listen. What if this information would get me out of here?
"Lets start with a basic note, Im your grandmother, ad this world is what you wished for from the mirror right? So, now you are trapped in this world. When I was about your age I made this same wish, I was mad at someone and....that doesn't matter! Anyways I am going to help you escape, and when you do escape a part of you is left here. And light, a good light. That good light that is left here will destroy all the bad here and if a few more lights dosn't get here the darkness from here will take over the earth! I have to help you get out of here or else you may put thousands and billions of inocent people in danger! You have to trust me Saphire!" She said in her own croaking little voice. Yet what if these were one of the people who were disguised as her. "So you don't believe me?" "Im not sure." I said in a whisper. "Well, than does this prove it?" she asked than her shadow transformed into the real her. "Okay, now I do." I said gulping. We sat down not knowing what to say. "Now, if you want to get out of here you have to do these things for me." she said I nodded.
Chapter Ten I starred at her eyes they were a dark green. "Before you get to what I need to do, may I ask you something?" I said to her leaning in. "What?" she asked shaking her head. "If I escape, since you said a part of me would stay here, would it really be me?" I asked no knowing how to ask the question. I understood she knew what I was saying right away. "No, I'm just a certain part in your grandmothers brain, that part is full of good and kindness. I'm not really her, I just am just like her and look like her." she said, I felt uncomfortable talking to the stranger, yet I felt a sence of warm love leading me on to what I had to do. "Oh, well alright." I shrugged my arms and she continued. "Now do you have anymore questions before I tell you what you need to do?" she asked putting her hand on my arm, she didn't feel the same. She felt young, her wrickedy, boney hands were not there any longer. Instead they felt like my mothers. Than I started to think, mother. Soon a single tear slipped from my eye and landed in my lap, there came a family of tears chasing after eachother one by one. "Pull yourself together, please. I know you hate it here and regret it, but you have to move on if you want this to all end." She said grasping the outside of my face holding it tightly. I closed my eyes and waited for memories of mother to come. I could feel her, not her hands but her voice. You can do this, you can common! You miss me? Come get me! I'm worried sick! I opened my eyes. I opened my eyes to grandmother or the shape of grandmother taken by her light. "Lets just go than. I need to get home." I pleaded wiping away the tears from my face. "You must kill, three people. The people that you see almost everyday, they hold a great touch to you. They hold a great touch because they are very close to you." she said letting go of my face. "Okay please tell me the these people I have to kill." I said to the stranger. "Your teacher, in homeroom, your sister and your mother." "Why not my baby brother? Not that I don't want to! But he is closer to me than my teacher right?" I started to sob uncontrollably. "Well, your brother dosn't have such a big hold on you because he was just born and you don't know him that well. Please, please don't cry! When you kill your mother, sister and teacher here, you will feel great because remember, they want to kill you too!"
Chapter Eleven I understood what she was saying but for some reason my mind kept pushing this thought away. "What will it do any good for me to kill these people here?" I blurted out the question just raced out my mouth. "Good question, when you banish the bad most people here it will make few bad people to destroy." she said, it was helpful but she didn't answer my question right. "I ment how will this affect me in escaping although that is useful information but how will this help me escape?" I asked more clearer once again. "Oh sorry! By doing this it will hurt those real people in the earth your used to, they will feel no pain what so ever in dieing or something like that, they will just miss you deeply and for some particular reason when they miss you even more they think about where you are. When they think about were you are, they will discover your in the mirror more quickly." I listened to every word she said, it was confusing but for some reason it all cleared up. I could understand everything she had said and it was amazing. "Well, I want to get out of here as quick as I can right? Than I'm off to start with the easiest one to kill, my teacher!" I said standing up and brushing my jeans. "No wait! You cannot just go!" she said pulling me right back down. "What now!" I was starting to get annoyed at all this, how could I remember it all? "You cannot just walk up and kill them! You need to find a sord first! I guess I left a big part out huh?" I sighed, great another thing to do on the list! I thought. "Im sorry! I should have told you all this in a very short way, I know you are anxious to get out of here." she said laying her hands in mine. "This is the trickiest part, this sord is somewhere under your house." she said making a face like she was sorry. I gulped. "Under the house?!"
Chapter Twelve I ripped my backpack open and took jugs of my drink and also a small energy bar, well for energy. I stood and put the bag on my back. "Since I'm there with the sord might as well kill her." I said with a shurg, I turned on my way through the woods, the light aboved me started to turn into dark beads of the moon light. I walked on anyway, my now she would possibly be making dinner, noticing that all her food was gone, I smiled at that. I was pumped and ready. We soon reached the house, I peeked through the bushes to see the kitchen light on and her eatting dinner with my sister. I had a plan. "Can you so me a favor?" I asked grandmother. "Sure sweetie what?" "I want you to ring the door bell and leave this food there when I climb through the window when you ring and leave the bag, run and hide I'll take it from there." I said than I was off the find that sord. I ran to the other side of the house unnoticed. I crept along the trees than got to the metal flap door leading to under the house. Spiders, I thought. I crept under and yet couldn't see one thing, at least keeping the door open gave me some light from the moon. Just than I saw a dead man in the back of this place I scurried over like a mouse. "Oh dad what did she do to you?" I ripped the knife from his chest and came right out. I climbed up for surely leaving some nosie behind. I soon got through the window I left open and I could here the door bell ring just than I ran down stairs watching as she looked through the bag the dagger grasped in one hand than everything went blank.
Chapter Thirteen .•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•.•. I watched as she turned around and whipped her arm to my stomach, I flew in the air pounding into the wall, my head hit so hard I though it would break open. I couldn't move. I could make out the dagger on the floor and her walking toward me. I closed my eyes and heard someone get hurt, it sounded like breaking marble. I looked up, my grandmother attacking that beast. I fell to the ground just enough I could reac the dagger, I stood up slowly and suddenly a burst of madness came over me. "YOU DONT DO THIS TO ME!" I yelled I straightened my back and ran for her heart, I shoved that knife into her chest watching the evil mother scream in aratic pain. I sighed as I watched her bleed to her death, it wasn't over yet. I teard the knife from her and turn to see my sister wide eyed starring at me than the knife I clutched in my hand. "What did you do?!" she screamed, I ran after her crying knowing she had to die too. I took her by her neck and wrapped it in my arm sobbing away. "Why are you killing us!" she yelled. "Its the only way to get me out of here!" I screamed than I closed my eye and screamed at the feel of the knife plunging through her. I watched as her body fell to the ground and the blood drip. I ran out of the house some blood ploches on me, but I had to continue, one more I thought, one more.
Chapter Fourteen It felt odd to kill members of my family, it felt sad yet good to know I was one step closer to being all back to normal, as if none of this had ever happened. Once again gran gave me the corage to get back up and continue. I stood to my feet and walked a while to the school, my legs to tired to move but forced to. I walked slowly looking at the splattered blood splotches on my shirt. I though of how she tryed to kill me back, I didn't like it. I soon came upon school, high school. I walked through the doors to find my homeroom teacher Mr. Fletcher. I soon came to his room watching through the door window as he looked at papers holding a red pen. I stood to stare for a bit watching as he didn't know I was there just minding his own business. Than I pictured me barging in the room, his face looking up to see me holding a dagger, than trying to attack me. I frowned at that blank uncomfortable feeling. I walked in the room with the dagger behind my back. "You, you've finally made it here." I smiled at that and slowly paced around his desk him knowing that something was up. Maybe wondering if I had found the sord to grant the wish of killing him. I watched as his forehead creased at the blood on my shirt. I nodded and through the dagger in his back. I ung my head low at the sight of him dead now. I sighed and ran out the window I slid out, but something in my heart had stopped me, the last thing I remember from that world was collapsing on the ground.