Inside the Mirror Feedback thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *arimay (01), Sep 11, 2010.

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  1. Man... That was a Gory chapter
     
    #41 Starwars6374, Oct 2, 2010
  2. A little confusing... It also lacked the description necessary to pull it off
     
    #42 *iPimella (01), Oct 2, 2010
  3. Keep writing i cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!! 
     
    #43 _tab__, Oct 3, 2010
  4. Keep writing i cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!! 
     
    #44 _tab__, Oct 3, 2010
  5. it posted twice again! 
     
    #45 _tab__, Oct 3, 2010
  6.  
    #46 TRICE, Oct 3, 2010
  7. Lol alright
     
    #47 *arimay (01), Oct 3, 2010
  8. The last two chapters were extremely confusing and more poorly written then usual.
    The ending was cliché
     
    #48 *iPimella (01), Oct 3, 2010
  9. So ur not gonna continue the story?
     
    #49 *taylor13589 (01), Oct 3, 2010
  10. A rather... Upsetting ending. It had potential but you ruined the end a bit. I see you changed name too.
     
    #50 Starwars6374, Oct 4, 2010
  11. I can honestly say I don't like any of your stories. Lol. I'm not trying to be mean or anything but you kind of steal the plots from other movies and books. It's disturbing.
     
    #51 *Ipitydahooka (01), Oct 4, 2010
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