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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jul 8, 2010.

  1. Okay...another bump...but I WILL get back to it! Seriously. I have some pretty neat ideas that I think are original. At least I hope...
     
  2. Haven't had time to read it all, but I really like it so far, keep it up!
     
  3. Thanks lady!

    Alright, I'll try rolling something out today, Seth.
     
  4. Woot! Two posts in one day. Okay, they were small posts, but I'm still celebrating with ice cream!

    And...


    We're getting to a good part soon. ( MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!)

    sorry bout the evil laugh. I had too much coke today...
     
  5. FINALLY!
    Good job, Im no longer ANGREY;)
     
  6. Thanks!

    And good. An angry Seth is dangerous to just about everyone....
     
  7. -poke-

    100 post celebration!!!! 
     
  8. Awesome story irin. It seems like I'm here for all the celebration
     
  9. Thankyou W! Celebrations are always fun! I've got free cheesecake and ice cream at the café!
     
  10. That chapter, the one I just posted...do you see it? Do you see it? Ya, that one. It's uber important. Thats all I will say.

    Oh, exept that iZ is really -smother's mouth before I give anything away-

    SQUEEE! I'm soooo excited that I'm finally getting to the juicy parts.
     
  11. Sorry about that. I'm really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really hyper!


    Oh! Forgot to tell you. Renethon gets. -smothers mouth again-
     
  12. Just so y'all know, if I don't post in like...a day, then I've probably exploded from all this hyper-ness-ness-ness.

    Oh! Pick mee pick mee! Kay. Forgot somethin else...ummm...oh ya.

    Well, Seth is gonna -smothers mouth again-

    MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
     
  13. Arg!
    NEEDS MORE!
     
  14. There's moar for you Seth. Sorry it took so long. I actually did explode, and it took awhile to piece me back together. Puzzle-man wasn't any help either, but I did eventually do it myself. Though I am missing a finger...

    Anyways, if I have any readers out there, cause it seems like Seth is the only one reading, I wanted to know what you think about this protector guy. Is he an evil Arlem spy? Or is he really on Irin's side? Or is he something completely different?
     
  15. I think the puzzle guy is neutral
    and good job.
    Seth
     
  16. Thanks Seth, for the feedback, and for actually reading. I would quit, but I'm to determined to quite, plus, this might just be the most brilliant plot twist ever! (Mwahahaha!)

    and Neutral? Really? Why do you say that?
     
  17. I actually think "the protector" is somehow attached to the ring. I think he's supposed to find irin and help her complete her destiny or whatever. I'm pretty sure I'm wrong though.
     
  18. Woot! I have two readers! -does happy dance-

    very intersting theory, W...hmm...