In the Dark feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *lady-marian (01), Dec 2, 2010.

  1. Is this the feedback thread or roleplaying
     
  2. GlooMi rolls her eyes at the ignorance of Fang
    "Look at china. The kids are in school for 8+ hours a day. They work even harder, and they're the ones who have the best scientists. Their children work their asses off to get into a good school."
     
  3. "we Americans are extremely lazy by their standards," she finished
     
  4. Zaln looks to Taylor. "A bit of both."

    Turning his attention to Gloomi, "Aye, I see. Quite true. But then again, they suffer as well. Rich as they may be one year, the second, debt will eat them."

    iZaln
     
  5. GlooMi glances at Zaln, a little confused. "who suffers? The rich? Hardly. Most of the tax cuts the republicans promised were for the rich. In these times the rich stay rich, and the poor get poorer."
     
  6. Seeing the comment of the Chinese, Zaln chuckles. "Aye, I'm 70% Chinese, 30% Filipino. Hah, what's to say to that? Oh and tax cuts? Of course there won't be much. Our government is trillions of dollars in debt. I'm not surprised. But then again, Democrats just said the recession is over. Over my arse."

    iZ
     
  7. "I agree with GlooMi." Lady says, "Education must be cherished, cheesy motivation posters and all!"
     
  8. Lady please postmore
     
  9. I'm an outcast my clans have never Payed much attention to me I want them to but they won't they think I'm a werewolf when I'm not
     
  10. ..................qué?
     
  11. Chapter one: section two has been posted! enjoy!

    "Sorry for the wait, ive been practicing my editing skills, and apparently you're supposed to wait a bit before you edit, so you look at it with fresh eyes." Lady said, giving her lame excuse for not posting sooner!;)
     
  12. "Great chapter, Lady Marian!" Irin said joyfully. She was glad there was a new installment.
     
  13. "I'm starting part three now, should be ready by Tuesday, please nag me to get it done!" Lady pleads, "I'll skip homework to write anytime!" "Too bad I finished all my homework." She muttered to herself.
     
  14. Great title
     
  15. Also great story
     
  16. I like it so far. But the word faerie looks weird on the iPod. Anyways... It's good so far, but I have trouble keeping track of the characters.