Kool/Angel..... Srsly? You post a story labeled, "Should I write a book" or whatever it's called, and you just start writing with no one's opinion??? Your grammar still sucks, even with your kindle. Did you think it would help? No. You're too young you say? If you're so young, stop cussing. I'm surprised your parents don't wash your mouth out with soap. When I was under the age of 10, my parents would do that to me. So stop. No more excuses. You put this upon yourself every single time you clogged up Fan Fiction with a new story and a new thread. Candi is right here. Also, here's a tip: Don't you dare insult any of us. I will drop my build just to farm you.
Lemon. We gave him/her/it multiple chances. There it is. The idiot, is you. Did I not say to insult any of us? I'm giving you one more chance. I've been too generous, but that's me. One more time and all of your accounts lose their gold. One more time and I will, metaphorically, kill your KaW life.
Oh okay, Tiger, well I'm only 9th grade, all be it top set, but I guess my English teacher/tutor told us the simpler version so as to not confuse us.
Candi, I do agree with you but just slightly. But weren't we all there at some point? A young writer? I know that none of us ever posted work when we didn't know the rules of writing, but everyone has to start somewhere. I'm helping Angel to modify her work through direct messages, maybe once you've seen an improvement in her writing then you might consider an apology, especially to someone as young as her.