Greeds Thorned Vines Feeback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Jun 2, 2012.

  1. Loll thanks Zaln :D I'm going back to my roots. Hmmm...good point...I don't think I thought that up well enough but lets just say that they don't want to release anything in the newspapers yet.
    It was the beach and yacht club resort.(The yacht side)I think it was 5 star.
     
  2. Lol I see. Mysterious. And beach and yacht? Too rich for me 

    iZaln
     
  3. :O

    My guy hasn't been featured yet and we're only three chapters in!
    I'm going to commit suicide now! Thanks for ruining my life Stora. 

    Jk, I like it. But seems a bit too typical to be raining during a mystery novel. I guess it is England :|
    Damn you English weather.
    And I'm going to tell you now, if there are signs or notices or newspapers with non-English spellings, I will not be forgiving.
    I like where you're going with the story though.
     
  4. I'm not in yet either 

    We must kill, the storaellalite
     
  5. @Zaln lol it was nice, the interior and design was amazing. But it was only a one time thing.
    @Paradox sorry! And I'll try to remember...Canadian and British spelling are kinda the same I think. And yes it's the English weather,
    @Pie Sorry


    Oh yeah and another sorry. I might not write much. Summer school is hell and it's only been two days...two days and I gotta wrote a report and have a test. All due tomorrow
     
  6. No one got my batman reference

    You know "We must kill, the batman"
    And I said we must kill, the stora.

    I feel so misunderstood
     
  7. I never watched batman.
     
  8. Come on you don't have to have watched batman to not recognize we must kill the batman
    And one does not simply kill the batman
     
  9. Still don't get it.
     
  10. Pie, no one gets references in FF.
    None of my references got noticed in the latest FTLoC.
    And no one got my MLP:FiM reference in the Cafè.
     
  11. But do you get the batman reference paradox
     
  12. Hell to the yeah!

    Can't wait for Dark Knight Rises!
     
  13. HA STORA IN YOUR FACE

    /end nub gloat

    On a side note hell yes can't wait for dark night rises
     
  14. Like it!!! 
     
  15. Stora y u no continue?
     
  16. ...I blame Steam and all the visual novel makers out there...

    I'll try to write some more tomorrow or this weekend.