This writing is deep. It sends a message and really plays with peoples emotions. Forget the hate. If people want to critique they should keep it constructive. Keep up the good work .
PLEEZ CONTINUE AND FINISH SO PEOPLE CAN READ AND NOT CRITISIZE (sorry for the caps lock rage) Its a decent plot but your going pretty fast just describe a little more Your doing great
Guys, shut up! If you want to read more, go to PiMD, it's full of **** stories like this and I think she continued it. Now let this thread die on KaW.
King, shut your ****ing trap. I'm irritable and even though I'n prepping for a training war, I'm not afraid to farm the living **** out of your greasy, egotistical and dumb hide.
Parry? Are you ****ing kidding me? If that's the best insult you could think of you need some help smack talking.
But, your story is good, but the writers in KaW's fanfiction are.. Like.. Masters at this.. You should take this back to PiMD