GlooMi's Story List+ Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Sep 23, 2010.

  1. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    np
     
  2. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    Name: Restinia

    Gender: Female

    Appearance: dirty-blond hair in a messy bun, light brown eyes, average height for her age (whatever that is), full red lips, eyebrows that make her look angry all the time
     
  3. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    Got it :D thank you Lady M
     
  4. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    Your welcome!
     
  5. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    First chapter is up! It doesn't have any characters in it reallythough, you guys won't come for another few chapters, merely because I have to get the plot going. Sorry :|
     
  6. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    Great job gloomi give me sec






    Name: Claude Von Gustan
    Age: 19
    (from France learned English from grandmother)
    Appearance: black hair, brown eyes, large build, tall,wears a beenie hat, wears regular tennis shoes, red t-shirt, jeans and black jacket
    Bio: went to America(I'm guessing on that) to find out why no one had any contact with the people there, so he snuck onto a cargo ship and landed in Virginia(again just guessing America),barely escaping from the dock security crew. He's surprised what has happened to the country. He's been sneaking around the country trying to keep the police off his trail.

    Hope I helped
     
  7. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    No bios German :mad:

    I don't think i can use the bio anyway, it doesnt' fit into the plot at all.
     
  8. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    But I'll use the rest :)
     
  9. Re: GlooMi's Story List/Signup for her new story

    Ok didn't know no bios lol
     
  10. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    I wrote it on the first page... maybe I need to make it bigger and more noticeable lol
     
  11. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    See it now? :p
     
  12. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    Found it.. Lol
    Anyways as I said before I like it.
     
  13. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    Thanks :D
     
  14. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    Hmm is it next to the red bold underline sentence........or mayb it is the red bold underline sentence lol sorry didnt even know u changed the first post I should read things more often
     
  15. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    Lol yep, reading is good :p
     
  16. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    Eh I guess so is this in America or another country like singapore
     
  17. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    I was hinting at America, but I'm not really sure myself lol
     
  18. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    .......can it b Transylvania cause I always wanted to kick Draculas ass for giving my gf a hickey..she never acted thevsame after that she would always go on midnight jogs hmmmmmmm
     
  19. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    Lol... No
     
  20. Re: GlooMi's Story List+ Signup/Feedback for her new story

    Sign me up! Sorry I am late, I was shopping for gifts -.-

    Name: Zaln
    Gender: Male
    Appearance: Black haired with cold, calculating matching eyes. Has a vertical scar under his right eye. Likes to sweet talk and charm whomever whenever where it's necessary. Doesn't feel attached to many because it's his nature.

    iZaln