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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Sep 23, 2010.

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    Name: Azair
    Age: 26
    Gender: Male
    Class: Rouge
    Weapons: Stiletto blade, or a iron mace. Depending on the situation

    Appearance: A shorter more lithe figure, a ragged mess of black hair, hazel eyes, and a crooked grin. If more is needed for this, ask.

    Personality: Albeit normally calm and soft-spoken, his words let on to a much darker; almost psychotic state of mind.
     
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    Name:Antiochus
    age:25
    gender:male
    class:warrior
    weapons:hoplon shield,10ft steel spear,short sword,pilum(throwing spear)x4,sewnplate ex.roman armour
    apperance:has a swarthy complexion(much like a Greek person)
     
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    Oh and personality: has a warriors spirit normally quiet but gives important peices
    of advice also has key understanding of tactics and strategy
     
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    Name: Zaln
    Age: 21
    Gender: Male
    Class: Rogue
    Appearance: Wears black, weightless armor. Uses a shash to cover his bottom face. Dark emerald, calculating eyes.

    Ummm gotta see what else.

    iZaln
     
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    Weapons: Uses dual, emerald blades and a shortsword, hidden.
    Personality: Likes to mess around a lot. Enjoys the company of friends and family. Zaln is always cheery and congenial, even when fighting.

    iZaln
     
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    Name Luke
    Age idc
    Class Warrior (or water/Ice Mage)
    Weapon frost sword (can freeze ppl)
    Personality friendly but violent
    Appearance Blonde hair icy blue eyes he has a snowflake tatoo on his back or chest and his left hand is encased in ice (ice part optional)


    Hope u like him Gloomi
     
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    Personality (cont.): His exuberant personality is sometimes inappropriate. He gets paranoid sometimes and isn't trustworthy to those he just meets. Also has an addiction to gambling, but it gets worse, he's always gambling and loosing all his money. He hates not getting his way and pouts sometimes. Depending on situation, he may act distant and not heed any attention to anything else but his own thoughts and actions.

    iZaln
     
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    Name:Chaos
    Gender:Male
    ClassPyromancer(mage)
    Wepon:A longsword that was forged in a substance that makes the sword usable for spells.
    Apparance:Medium brown hair,red eyes,has cars over all of his body from his training amd fights and wears a used lether armor equipment.
    Personnality:Arrogant,short tempered,easely provocd,coragous,perseverent.
    Age:unknown looks like 30
     
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    Hope you like my mage
     
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    Is the story dead
     
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    Come on gloomi get started. Lol
     
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    Name:Caligula
    Class:Mage (Fire and conjuring spells)
    Age:27
    Weapon: magic staff and a long hunting knife
    Appearance:Long black hair with a red robe and hood
    Personality:Mostly not serious except in fights
     
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    Name:ryan. Class:Mage(black Mage) gender:male weapons:large staff with tattered grimior apearence:black hat that has a long rim to cast a shadow over face blonde hair and bleach white skin scars in shapes of a large star on the top of each hand personality : has a very large intellect but doesn't share it (could be a good opposite for lady mariana character but on the same team and maybe siblings)
     
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    Oh yeah age: 15
     
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    Soz shadow Mage (aka necromancer)
     
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    Ok, will be writing later today. I have already chosen my main character from a bio that was written... Two stories ago? I'm sorry Marian, Amanda doesn't fit the image for my main. Character making is now closed to all but Irin and DarkFalcon lolz. I will begin in a couple hours.
     
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    Yaaaaaaah






    Ps:.......did I get in








    Pps:..........csn I borrow a nickel and a cupcake
     
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    Lol, it's ok gloomi.














    Was it the personality? Cause that my personality!
     
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    No actually it was the tone. I'm looking for someone who's a mix of dark and childlike. Yours is neither lolz
     
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    What about mine?