Gandafltgeginger's story feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 13, 2010.

  1. Use this as gandafltgeginger's feedback for his story we are both writting and editing. Pls don't use the story.
    It makes it harder to read it everyone puts "good job" twenty of them=2pgs of spam making people less likly to read on
     
    #1 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 13, 2010
  2. Bump
     
    #2 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 14, 2010
  3. Nice story is my char in it?9
     
    #3 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 14, 2010
  4. Bjorn it should cone later.

    As fir we are both editing it at the moment
     
    #4 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 14, 2010
  5. Bump
     
    #5 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 14, 2010
  6. Thanks Angus u r a good apprentice
     
    #6 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 14, 2010
  7. Thx Ginger
     
    #7 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 14, 2010
  8. This guys mean  He banned me from his kaw group 
     
    #8 ChristianHick, Aug 14, 2010
  9. Mr playa we r brothers ok can u give Angus another chance
     
    #9 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 14, 2010
  10. Yes  i no his real name
     
    #10 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 14, 2010
  11. U know mine 2 not exactly a massive threat
     
    #11 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 14, 2010
  12. Yep. Now let's stop this is wrecking the thread
     
    #12 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 14, 2010
  13. Anyone need details about this?
     
    #13 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 14, 2010
  14. Incredibly brilliant!!!!
     
    #14 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  15. Yayyyyyyy !!!!!!!!!!
     
    #15 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010
  16. Are you still thinking about the title?
     
    #16 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  17. I have an idea wen I get the story up I'll use it
     
    #17 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010
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