Thx guys! Perhaps I will(not this week I'm a bit too busy, maybe I'll start next weekend? *hint* *hint*) @King lol I hoped a surprised you? @Paradox That'll be a bit hard since the only code I know is for VB Sounds like a nice idea though, but I probably won't be able to pull it off
It was a nice surprise. I normally consider myself intellectual enough to predict what will happen beforehand accurately. Well played, Storallelite. Well played.
@King Ty (I hope you weren't sarcastic? Lol) @Paradox that's true...hmmm.... @Dusk Ty! Well I suppose I'll start planning, perhaps it'll work out
Get it published... Oh yeah, coding is fun. Again, look it up on the internet. Internet knows all 0.0
Seems good enough to me to get published. Maybe introduce some more foreshadowing, start to reveal more of a plot, i.e. the girl being in the game because she lives in a post-apocalyptic world, etc.
I did enjoy it but may I suggest not describing your character by having he/she look into a mirror and describe their appearance. There's nothing wrong with it but I find it's getting cliche. I've seen that technique used far too many times in other stories...admittedly I've fallen into that pothole a few times too. Back on the topic at hand: I liked it and it's well written.