Fury and a Half feedback and discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Interrobang, Jun 9, 2011.

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  1. I just thought it was Sci-Fi like :?
     
    #21 Interrobang, Jun 30, 2011
  2. great chapter....but a bit heavy on the swearing :shock:
     
    #22 Storallelite, Jun 30, 2011
  3. You bypassed several times. You can get forum banned for that.
     
    #23 FeatherHunter, Jun 30, 2011
  4. i don't think he bypassed feather. nothing is replaced
     
    #24 Storallelite, Jun 30, 2011
  5. The stars in the cuss words are bypassing.
     
    #25 FeatherHunter, Jun 30, 2011
  6. idk,you can't see the whole word.
     
    #26 Storallelite, Jun 30, 2011
  7. BLOOD! VIOLENCE! PROFANITY!
    GORE!


































    I like it!


     
    #27 *Utho (01), Jun 30, 2011
  8. Utho, next half chapter has more blood and gore.

    Feather, I'm not changing how I'd normally say it (but adding to 'i's or 'u's is) but you couldn't tell if **** is the f word or the s word.
     
    #28 Interrobang, Jul 1, 2011
  9. ...anyone home? I haven't seen a new chapter recently... I enjoyed reading this...
     
    #29 *Utho (01), Jul 9, 2011
  10. Utho, I'm writing FTLOC so when Stora's posted a FTLOC chapter you will see Fury and a Half :)

    But it's my turn and I have too many end of school essays!
     
    #30 Interrobang, Jul 9, 2011
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