Forgotten Times Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Conqueress, Sep 25, 2010.

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  1. READ THIS STORY, YOU WONT REGRET IT!
     
    #21 *lady-marian (01), Sep 28, 2010
  2. Geez conq, you want bumps, just ask 
    Bump
     
    #22 osterly, Sep 29, 2010
  3. Bump
     
    #23 Conqueress, Sep 29, 2010
  4. Wow! Great story, Conq! I love your writing style.
     
    #24 *Irin (01), Sep 29, 2010
  5. Thanks
     
    #25 Conqueress, Sep 29, 2010
  6. I'm still working on the beginning. I'm trying to make threader feel what the characters feel. How the world grew dark around him and stuff like that
     
    #26 Conqueress, Sep 29, 2010
  7. Please let this and my story die 
     
    #27 Conqueress, Sep 30, 2010
  8. Awwww y?
     
    #28 *iPimella (01), Sep 30, 2010
  9. :]

    No. Mwahahaha. I have to finish first.
     
    #29 Winters, Sep 30, 2010
  10. No one reads it and when I am attacked by disappointment I make it die
     
    #30 Conqueress, Sep 30, 2010
  11. NEEEEEEVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRR
     
    #31 german_idiot, Sep 30, 2010
  12. Just because no one posts feedback doesn't mean no one reads it, some people just don't post feedback.
     
    #32 *iPimella (01), Sep 30, 2010
  13. I'd rather they post feedback so I know whether yo continue it and attempt publishing it when I'm donE
     
    #33 Conqueress, Sep 30, 2010
  14. There are plenty of lurkers on kaw.......  and you should finish it, you just have to branch off from this seemingly linear storyline you have developed.
     
    #34 osterly, Sep 30, 2010
  15. Oh I will. After chapter six everything is different. Twists, awkward love, distrust, yadah yadah, a girl who dies 3 times in total
     
    #35 Conqueress, Sep 30, 2010
  16. Yeah besides I still haven't seen my character get eaten and/or stomped on I'm looking forward towards that
     
    #36 german_idiot, Sep 30, 2010
  17. Which character?
     
    #37 Conqueress, Sep 30, 2010
  18. Caligula the Mage dude
     
    #38 german_idiot, Sep 30, 2010
  19. Since when is Caligula here? He was Cesar in ancient rome. So you mean calligenia?
     
    #39 Conqueress, Sep 30, 2010
  20. That's where I heard the name from I just used it because it sounded ancienty
     
    #40 german_idiot, Sep 30, 2010
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