Forever Chapter 1

Hey smighter the blighter .... I remember what your critacism was like ...


I'm giving him advice ... not YOUR GRAMMER SUCKS YOU NEVER IMPROVED GET THE F OUTA FF

Like some of your posts .... (fyi at least I used spaces and spellcheck)

 

And ...I relatively like the storyline GOOD JOB LYNN

 

Angel. You tell me which sounds nicer. "Are you like in 3rd grade!?!?"

My criticism was actual critique. Then I started getting annoyed with you and your 10 different story threads that had a paragraph each.

I can make up names too, angel the paingel. ORMERGERSH IM CLEVER

 

Stormlyyn

Your thread is slowly going into madness Rule 1: always check grammar

 

Ok, continue with the story (and keep our posts in your head)