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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Storallelite, Mar 24, 2011.

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  1. YAY! It's very very good :D
     
    #61 Storallelite, Aug 29, 2011
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    I'll fix the BBcodes later…
     
    #62 Interrobang, Apr 22, 2012
  3. It's very... Original?
    But I think I've seen another thread with a similar name. And its a little slow at the start. Very funny though :lol:
    I love bob :lol:
     
    #63 etak, Apr 22, 2012
  4. A nice change from all the depressing action-filled stories out there. (not that I don't like them) but this is really good. 
     
    #64 etak, Apr 22, 2012
  5. Two words (or if you count these and the ones before these, thirteen): Freaking hilarious.
     
    #65 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Apr 23, 2012
  6. Fifteen. :p
     
    #66 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Apr 23, 2012
  7. New chapters.

    I'll fix all broken bbcodes tomorrow.
     
    #67 Interrobang, May 20, 2012
  8. Great stuff! Just the bbcodes I think
     
    #68 Storallelite, May 20, 2012
  9. You brokened teh bbcodes.

    Other than that: <3
     
    #69 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 21, 2012
  10. I butchered teh BBcodes.
     
    #70 Interrobang, May 21, 2012
  11. ._. You slowly tortured them, then butchered them.
     
    #71 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 21, 2012
  12. Best story ever
     
    #72 *PielordTy (01), May 21, 2012
  13. Fixed BBCodes.
     
    #73 Interrobang, May 21, 2012
  14. <3 The BBCodes then came back to life.
     
    #74 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, May 22, 2012
  15. it rocks! I liked the playlist part. I've heard of a few of the bands you listen to Paradox.
     
    #75 Eaglestar, May 25, 2012
  16. Please continue it is genuinely intriguing... :cool:
     
    #76 etak, May 25, 2012
  17. New chapter is up.

    I would also wish to note that this chapter is dedicated to Choco. As today; 15th of June 2012 is the day she quits.

    That is all.
     
    #77 Interrobang, Jun 15, 2012
  18. <3 Thanks, Para…

    Didn't spot the references, because I'm tired as hell. And it's not even five o'clock yet. Sigh...
     
    #78 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Jun 15, 2012
  19. Great chapter! Didn't find the quotes things though.

    And BTW you only have 439 songs in your iDevice? I have 1337....
     
    #79 Storallelite, Jun 15, 2012
  20. I only have 100 something...

     
    #80 iNTeR_Candidus_MaSS, Jun 16, 2012
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