Feedback: The Secret Keeper

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Dec 5, 2010.

  1. please continue ur story
     
  2. Irin I can't find your story, can you post a link?
     
  3. awesome story irin!!

    put more!!!

    i need ore or i shall die!!!
    *looks behind myself and sees a government dude*
    OH NO I LED THEM RIGHT TO U IM SO SORRY I DIDNT KNOW THAT I WAS BEING FOLLOWED D: :shock: :( :cry: :shock: :eek:
     
  4. Thanks guys.

    @Sam, I'll bump it for you.

    @Reg, I'll try and get something up soon. Been sick lately. And don't worry about the government guys. I...uh...shall we say, 'convinced' them to stay away from here under certain...uh...conditions...
     
  5. Reg looks at Irin suspiciously. She wonders what conditions Irin means, but decides not too think about it too much.
     
  6. Through the magical powers of the KaW forums, Irin is able to read Reg's thoughts. "Trust me," she says darkly. "You don't want to know."
     
  7. Reg knows she doesn't want to know and that's why she didn't ask. She also wonders if Irin looked at her Pie Land role play thread.
     
  8. Thanks guys! Next post is up.
     
  9. Amazing job so far!
     
  10. Post more Irin! It's great
     
  11. Thanks guys! I'll try to get something up tomorrow.
     
  12. write ur stories on paper not forums
     
  13. Thank you, Lady.

    To whitehawk, I warn you to brace yourself, because I'm about to get angrey.

    There are a number of reasons why I will not take your advice. The first of which being: KaW admins made the Fan Fiction for a reason. This is in the correct section, so I don't see why on earth this should bother you. You suggest I write on paper. Not to be a green freak or anything, but by posting on kaw I am not useing paper and therefore saving trees.

    And did you even read the story? I doubt you did. So do not judge my -or anyone elses story- without reading, as itis disrespectful.

    I have been posting stories on kaw for nearly a year now, and that is not going to change just because some noob who wouldn't know what common sense is -even if it hit you right between the eyes- told me to. I, and every other writer on kaw has worked hard to create a story, and we should NOT be disrespected.

    I think I speak for most -if not ALL- of the KaW writing community when I politely say:

    GET THE F*** OUT OF FAN FICTION and do NOT come back untill you learn to RESPECT other writers and their HARD WORK and EFFORT in creating a tale which others enjoy.

    Thank you for reading this message.
     
  14. I don't know if he read it, but I did, and I agree with every word!;)
     
  15. *is completely speechless at Irin*
     
  16. Great story irin

    Write more

    PLEASE

    again love the story