Feedback: The Bounty Huntress

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011.

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  1. Quoting you, "someone came along" so I rest my case. Though I would like to guess there's a twist in this.

    iZaln
     
    #21 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  2. So you don't know who killed him?
     
    #22 *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011
  3. I have my guesses.

    iZaln
     
    #23 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  4. Would you like to know if you are right?
     
    #24 *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011
  5. Yes. Who lol?

    iZaln
     
    #25 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  6. It doesn't work that way. Wall me your guess if you want to find out.
     
    #26 *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011
  7. Girls. They're so complicated xD

    iZaln
     
    #27 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  8. ...just for that I won't tell you if your wrong or right.
     
    #28 *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011
  9. Whaaat?! :0

    iZaln
     
    #29 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  10. Isn't Karma a *****?

    Hehehe.

    You know what? I'm finally in that evil mood I've been needing. Thanks Zaln!

    -runs off to write-
     
    #30 *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011
  11. ...I feel like I was used >.> Frikin Karma. Your so badazz.

    iZaln
     
    #31 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  12. Calm down. I'll let you know anyway.

    'Cause I'm nice like that.
     
    #32 *Irin (01), Jun 24, 2011
  13. Ok haha.

    iZ
     
    #33 Nlaz, Jun 24, 2011
  14. I kinda like the story though from what ive read it seems to be going nowhere yet .
     
    #34 *Poisonfang (02), Jun 24, 2011
  15.  yay irin
     
    #35 Empress_of_Shadows, Jun 24, 2011
  16. very good.you shud probably make chapters a bit longer though.
     
    #36 etak, Jun 24, 2011
  17. Is it a gal???
     
    #37 mark11, Jun 26, 2011
  18. Hmmm... Good question. The character is referred to as a daughter... I'm thinking a yes? xD

    iZaln
     
    #38 Nlaz, Jun 26, 2011
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    #39 mark11, Jun 26, 2011
  20. It's good
     
    #40 mark11, Jun 26, 2011
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