Feedback for stranded.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *camotan12 (01), Jun 29, 2011.

  1. Chapter 12 is now up, please read, hope you enjoy it, I know it's kinda dull but the next chapter shall be action packed. All opinions are welcome! Thank You all for reading stranded, I hope you enjoy this book. I am almost finished with it, only a few more chapters till it's over.
     
  2. Here's what's goin on. I'm really busy this week which means not much activity In my story, whenever I have a free day I'll write 4 chapters.
     
  3. Warning, Chapter 13-15 of stranded shall have intense violence, blood and gore, this Is a warning for readers.

    Chapter 13 is up. Now more will be coming in the next few days
     
  4. Feedback needed plz
     
  5. I'm not really a fan of gore so any feedback I leave will be biased for this chapter...good though
     
  6. Chapter 14 is now up, please read and thanks for any feedback
     
  7. It's really good. The gore was there, but you didn't make it extremely graphic which is good. I don't really have any complaints so far 
     
  8. Thanks, I was thinking I might've needed more detail so thanks for letting me know it was just enough.
     
  9. i'm glad it wasn't graphic :D On the short side...and i'm surprised that wheatley was still thinking once he was chopped open and his organs pulled out. It doesn't seem that realistic.
     
  10. He didn't have his organs pulled out yet, plus it's gotta have a bit of drama lol :)
     
  11. Yes but you gotta keep it realistic...unless it's a pure fantasy story with like magic, gnomes, and elves...lol
     
  12. Been really busy with work plz forgive me, I'll work on it as soon as I get a chance. Thanks
     
  13. Still dissecting dead bodies camo? I still don't believe you :?
     
  14. Alright guys, I'll be posting another chapter sometime today or late tonight, I've been extremely busy with work.

    Phoenix, I can put a scalpel in you gladly if you wish. If mods read, that isn't a threat but a joke forensic scientists here kid about.

    So anyways y'all I'll post another chapter really soon.

    If I don't get a good amount of people wanting me to continue it I'll stop and try writing a new story. Thanks y'all.
     
  15. Please continue 