Feedback for stranded.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *camotan12 (01), Jun 29, 2011.

  1. Due to recent events the next chapter will be postponed till tomorrow, I apologize for the inconvenience. I got part of the way through it till I got writer's block.
     
  2. Awesome story ur rlly smart u know lots about planes it's obvious u put that in ur story I like it DONT MAKE BELLA DIE LOL( she sounds like me) and is tgeir gonna b any romance u should do that lol other than that amazing story!!!!!
     
  3. MY FAVE CHARACTER IS ME!(bella)
     
  4. Chapter 9 of stranded is now up sorry for the double post the one on page two was the completed version. Please post feedback bout the correct post of chapter 9. Positive or critical, either are welcomed. Thanks For reading :D
     
  5. I need some feedback plz, anything is appreciated. Thanks
     
  6. I think ur story is good anyone who says it's bad is insane
     
  7. Thanks I appreciate that :)
     
  8. Alright y'all, I know I don't have many fans but those who are please note I'm goin on vacation this weekend. Sunday night you'll have another chapter, please understand and thank you all for reading my story.
     
  9. Alright guys I'm back from Cape Hatteras, to make up the days I was gone I'll try to write 2 chapters today/tonight. If I can't get one out I apologize. Thanks y'all
     
  10. Chapter 10 is finally up y'all hope y'all enjoy post some feedback here please!
     
  11. Positive reviews and negative reviews are welcomed and appreciated, thanks :D
     
  12. What about medium reviews? :D

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  13. Yeah them too lol
     
  14. Then it's, medium with a hint of medium.
     
  15. Well it's my first story so that's great to me lol >.<
     
  16. It's really good :) Can't wait for the next chapter 
     
  17. Not bad. Keep writing!
     
  18. Chapter 11 is now up, I think it fell short of my expectations, please give some feedback, all are welcome. Thanks
     
  19. I say go back and edit on PC  Make the fight longer and more destructive! 