Feedback for stranded.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *camotan12 (01), Jun 29, 2011.

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  1. Yeah just post a character from the criminal, the FBI agent, or the gang leader.

    Name

    Age

    Appearance

    Bio

    Strengths

    Weaknesses

    (modern day)

    Setting- Traveling from city to city never staying in one place too long.

    The theme is Being chased, given orders, carrying out orders, murdering, robbing, etc.
     
    #41 *camotan12 (01), Jun 30, 2011
  2. @Stora, usually when you break something you can't feel it. Which is why I didn't include that.
     
    #42 *camotan12 (01), Jun 30, 2011
  3. ah...well i didn't know that(i've never broken anything in my life except perhaps my pinkie which i didn't know i hurt until like months later lol) But you still need more description anyway. Just keep it in mind when you write.
     
    #43 Storallelite, Jun 30, 2011
  4. Alright, thanks :) will try to describe better
     
    #44 *camotan12 (01), Jun 30, 2011
  5. Yes you can post the characters now so I can plan while writing Stranded
     
    #45 *camotan12 (01), Jun 30, 2011
  6. Chapter 6 of stranded is now out! Come back here and leave your feedback, what you loved, what you Hated, and what I need to improve on.
     
    #46 *camotan12 (01), Jul 1, 2011
  7. Please give me some feedback about chapter 6, Id like to know what I did good and what I need to improve on. Thanks :)
     
    #47 *camotan12 (01), Jul 1, 2011
  8. The description is much better.
     
    #48 Storallelite, Jul 1, 2011
  9. I'd like some more feedback about chapter 6 of stranded please. It would be greatly appreciated
     
    #49 *camotan12 (01), Jul 1, 2011
  10. Have you killed Bella off already?!?!?!
     
    #50 *HannahMarie55 (01), Jul 1, 2011
  11. Not yet
     
    #51 *camotan12 (01), Jul 1, 2011
  12. I will pick up where she was left off in chapter 8
     
    #52 *camotan12 (01), Jul 1, 2011
  13. 'Least you're using the spacebar.
     
    #53 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  14. Correction: Enter/Return bar/button
     
    #54 FeatherHunter, Jul 1, 2011
  15. Chapter 7 of stranded is now up. Check it out and give some feedback y'all. Thanks
     
    #55 *camotan12 (01), Jul 2, 2011
  16. Need some feedback for chapter 7 plz, and thank you for any feedback positives and things I need to work on
     
    #56 *camotan12 (01), Jul 2, 2011
  17. Chapter 8 is now up, it focuses in on Bella here. The next chapter with Bella in it will be chapter 10. Please give me feedback for chapter 7 and 8 please. Thank you.
     
    #57 *camotan12 (01), Jul 2, 2011
  18. Sounds like the song off family guy "bird is the word" when the strange dude talks :lol:
     
    #58 *NecroHyphen (01), Jul 2, 2011
  19. Stay tuned for chapter 9 of stranded coming up today.
     
    #59 *camotan12 (01), Jul 3, 2011
  20. Nice
     
    #60 Storallelite, Jul 3, 2011
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