Feedback for Killer Reborn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Lil_Tiger, Jun 14, 2013.

  1. Broken bones from the washing machine, mental from brain shaking around in the washing machine
     
  2. yeah thats probably it.
     
  3. Its scary to think washing machines are taking over the world, come to think of it i heard some strange noises from the washing machine yesterday…
     
  4. Plane.... So creative, you should really put that to use. No, it's a broken ankle. Chapter up tomorrow hopefully. :)
     
  5. What I'm imagining in my head

    SCENE: Lil_Tiger's room

    Lil_Tiger is just waking up.

    Lil_Tiger: Ah, what a most excellent morning. I do feel so inspired. I believe I shall post a chapter of Killer Reborn. (smiling)

    Lil_Tiger climbs out of her bed, with a cast on her foot. She walks to her computer/mobile device and opens Kingdoms at War.

    Lil_Tiger: I shall just open up the forums...go to Fan Fic... Eureka! There it is, Killer Reborn! Now'll I'll just paste chapter one, an-

    Lil_Tiger jumps in pain and grabs at her broken ankle.

    Lil_Tiger: My ankle! My ankle! Chapter one will just have to wait, I suppose...(frowning)

    Meanwhile, in the secret lair of Killer Inside fans:

    Fan One: The not knowing is killing me! Who is the killer?!

    Fan Two: IT WAS TOTALLY CHRIS

    Fan Three: But Lil_Tiger said it wasn't Chris.

    Fan Two: SHE'S THROWING US OFF TRACK IT'S TOTALLY CHRIS

    Sobbing Fangirl: Is (sniff) KC coming back? (Sniff) I miss her so much...(sobs) Why can't I find my Chris (devolves into lump of tears)

    Fan One: Wait, everyone! My fandar just alerted me that Lil_Tiger is in trouble!

    Fan Three: Oh, no!

    Fan Two: CHRIS KILLED LIL_TIGER

    Normal Fan Fictioner: Geeze, quiet down guys. It's not like she's dead.

    Fangirl: But what if (sniff) she is?!

    Fan One: I'm not willing to take that chance. Fan powers, activate!

    Fan One disappears in a flash of smoke, along with Fans Two and Three.

    Back at Lil_Tiger's house...


    (Smoke flash)

    Fan Three: Tis us!

    Fan One: Your noble fans!

    Fan Two: I BET RADCLIFFE DID THIS TO YOU DIDN'T HE

    Lil_Tiger: Oh, my heroes! But alas I must confess that my ankle is fine, for I am in fact...KC!

    Fans One and Three: (gasp) No!

    Fan Two: KC'S ALIVE TOTALLY CALLED IT

    KC: Yes! It's the perfect plan: masquerade as an author with a "fictional" tale, so that no one will think I'm still alive.

    KC pulls out a knife and throws it into Fan One's chest.

    Fan Three: No!! Fan One!!

    KC: Muahahaha!

    Fan Three attempts to knock over KC, but fails as she stabs him with another knife.

    Fan Three: I was rooting (cough)...for you...(dies)

    KC: It's just me and you, Fan Two! Now you will die!

    Fan Two: Not so fast, KC! 'Cuz I'm Radcliffe, beach!

    KC: Noo!

    Radcliffe takes out a gun and shoots KC. She spasms and falls to the ground in a pool of blood. Just as she dies, Chris walks in. Radcliffe sets the gun next to him. The police barge in.

    Sergeant Carl: Who did this? Who killed all these people?!

    Radcliffe: IT WAS TOTALLY CHRIS

    Fin.




    Aaaaaand that is what happens when it's late and you haven't slept well for days.

    PS Thanks for being an awesome writer, Lil_Tiger :3
     
  6. ... You have way too much free time.
     
  7. You forgot the

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  8. I think the feedback thread is better than the story...
     
  9. This feedback thread is much longer than the story, lol. Anyways, Chapter's up. Btw, nice story there  Very creative. I'll have to keep that I mind.... Sorry to disappoint, I don't think I'm going on a mad killing spree quite yet.
     
  10. So, he still hasnt let go the suicide of his best friend/girlfriend, and yet, he's a therapist???
     
  11. Cuz screw logic and realistic scenarios
     
  12. A teenaged serial killer isn't necessarily normal either
     
  13. Does this include planes by any chance?
     
  14. The new killer is a plane.
     
  15. Eek! Thomas is my friends freaky hamster!
     
  16. I know who the new killer is!

    The new killer is a plane!
     
  17. whoa!! I love this story so far!
     
  18. Wait, im the killer…