Feedback for: Killer Inside

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Lil_Tiger, Jan 29, 2013.

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  1. I hate the kills :(
     
    #41 L00KER, Apr 13, 2013
  2. You're reading the wrong book then.
     
    #42 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Apr 14, 2013
  3. Well, there's lovely death scene up for anyone interested 
     
    #43 Lil_Tiger, Apr 14, 2013
  4. MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!
     
    #44 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, Apr 14, 2013
  5. I but I know the climax >.>
     
    #45 BlackShadows-, Apr 14, 2013
  6. You made me thowup yummy pancakes :(

    OMG THIS IS AMAZING
     
    #46 L00KER, Apr 14, 2013
  7. Delicious. Shouldn't of just killed them. It seemed anti-climatic.
     
    #47 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Apr 15, 2013
  8. I do too much description and I violate forum rules... But don't worry :) There's a good kill coming up.
     
    #48 Lil_Tiger, Apr 15, 2013
  9. "Violate forum rules" ??
     
    #49 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Apr 15, 2013
  10. I found it!!! Alright peeps, you can post here too.
     
    #50 Lil_Tiger, May 27, 2013
  11. have a last victim where she tortures the victim and gets the vict to do stuff under the force of a whip, followed by a narrow escape from the police
     
    #51 Planemaster, May 27, 2013
  12. **** that. Let her get caught by the police, and then escape and be shot down.
     
    #52 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, May 27, 2013
  13. Sounds too much like any other horror movie. Won't happen. He most likely has had the ending in his head since the beginning of the story, just be patient.
     
    #53 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, May 28, 2013
  14. I love this book anticipation kills though as I wait for chapters to come out.
     
    #54 SL_COURAGE_SL, May 28, 2013
  15. You're in luck, two did today. Also, Plane, I have an answer! Yes, I will tell a bit.

    It will not be a happy ending.

    That's all I'm saying.
     
    #55 Lil_Tiger, May 28, 2013
  16. Yay:) a happy ending, IMO, would kinda ruin the story
     
    #56 LemonWithAHintOfAssClown, May 28, 2013
  17. Lol yea,
    And then KC gets married and lives happily ever after and chris DOESN'T GET KILLED BY KC (shh)
     
    #57 Warry_the_Penguin, May 28, 2013
  18. When I say that, I mean of course KC kills chris
     
    #58 Warry_the_Penguin, May 28, 2013
  19. Quite obvious imo
     
    #59 Warry_the_Penguin, May 28, 2013
  20. Thats all i need :)
     
    #60 Planemaster, May 28, 2013
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