Feedback for: Killer Inside

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Lil_Tiger, Jan 29, 2013.

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  1. Oh one more thing I really like: you write quickly. Probably the fastest in FF which doesn't allow me to lose interest so again great story!
     
    #21 asdveq, Feb 13, 2013
  2. .... its spooky. Unnerving. Weird.

    I love it!!!!!!!! Keep writing...!
     
    #22 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Feb 13, 2013
  3. I luv the killer inside 
     
    #23 -IIIIIIllllllIIlIlIlIlIllIlIl-, Feb 14, 2013
  4. Wow you are very fast writer I love it!
     
    #24 asdveq, Feb 14, 2013
  5. Waahhahaaa that was even sadder 
     
    #25 koolmade, Feb 15, 2013
  6. Forces alt
     
    #26 koolmade, Feb 15, 2013
  7. More more more more more =D
     
    #27 *elaname (01), Feb 15, 2013
  8. Going to bumping this so people know it's here. Please try to post feedback here not on the story. If I get feedback, I might post Chapter 24 tomorrow or tonight. Tell me why you'd thinking of seeing the world from Chris's point of view.
     
    #28 Lil_Tiger, Apr 9, 2013
  9. OMG!!!
     
    #29 L00KER, Apr 9, 2013
  10. Does that mean that Chris is gay!?!?!
     
    #30 L00KER, Apr 9, 2013
  11. It's really good!
     
    #31 -IIIIIIllllllIIlIlIlIlIllIlIl-, Apr 10, 2013
  12. Well... Interesting. Can't wait to hear what's next.
     
    #32 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Apr 11, 2013
  13. OMFG CHRIS IS A P O S
     
    #33 L00KER, Apr 11, 2013
  14. more!!!
     
    #34 RowanWood187, Apr 12, 2013
  15. Is that the one where the girl kills people for no reason?


    Question.
     
    #35 BlackShadows-, Apr 12, 2013
  16. Yes, but not no reason. She has a reason just hasn't really discovered it yet.
     
    #36 Lil_Tiger, Apr 13, 2013
  17. Interesting. When will the next kill come? It would be interesting if it was Toby...
     
    #37 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Apr 13, 2013
  18. You're good :p just wait and see! More tonight, promise
     
    #38 Lil_Tiger, Apr 13, 2013
  19. I will wait patiently.
     
    #39 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Apr 13, 2013
  20. Sexy. I always love when she kills. You put so much detail into it...
     
    #40 XxTIl-__KING__-IITxX, Apr 13, 2013
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