Look, You have to sneak on your iPod, proves you are less then 16 maybe you are 14 and you are going thro hard times in this economy. (yes it effects collage students to) You go on about the "proper way" but there is not a proper way, if there was it would be just to enjoy their writings, it is important to them most of all, try working so hard on something and then people tell you: It sucks, I Hated every bit of it, STOP WRITING. those are all good examples. You complain about it almost every day, people want to have fun and be creative!!! Also I won't consider reading your "Notes" on their stories if you can't tell the difference between: Affect and Effect. And this concludes my Rant
WAIT. I just read the entire thing. Listen *****, my family is not going through tough times. We are doing just fine, in fact. There is always a proper way to do something. Writing in it's true form is always proper, but writing that is pure is in any form the author finds necessary. I DO NOT COMPLAIN ABOUT PEOPLE'S WRITING EVERYDAY. I complain about RP's whenever they arise, but that's really it. People respect my opinion. Well, most of them do. That may have been ostentatious but who cares. You had the audacity to say all that chiz so I'm gonna tell it like I see it. Lately, the way my mind works has been changing. I have a new perception of the world. It's a cruel place. Filled with poverty. Trash, littering a once-beautiful rainforest, now colored gray and brown from the gas given off of the trash. A child, ribs exposed and poking through skin, lying on her side in Somalia. No one will help them there. The world has acknowledged there is a humanitarian disaster there, but sit on there ass and do nothing. So, yeah. I have been moody lately and let people see another side of me. I have unleashed less than 1/5 of my fury. Affect has to do with emotions and psychological matters. Effect is more on the physical side. Maybe I used the wrong one but I know the difference you dumbass. ~FeatherHunter
Could you do my new story please? I know it doesn't meet the criteria or whatever, but I'd really like one done! -Swag x
My newish one, 'Don't Let the Sun Go Down.' You don't have to, I would just like a piece of proper feedback, if you know what I mean! And also, I know my story kind of revolves around romance at the moment. But that's just because I need to build up the story; this is just the beginning -Swag x
you most certainly act like a professional know-it-all. you speak as if your view is the only view and your view is 100% correct.