Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread (The Story Index) -The last sentence of your first paragraph is incomplete -you should join the third and fourth sentences of the second paragraph -change to: "Several were on horses, many were wielding..." -change the "a" after Cor says hold to "the" -your missing a "n" in your "then" after the word approached -new paragraph after "a fire burning within" and join "eight cavaliers. Their spears..." ( eight cavaliers, their spears...)
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread (The Story Index) I'm halfway done with homework and I want to sleep. But if I do sleep, I can't finish it tomorrow! What do I do?
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread (The Story Index) Don't be so overjoyed about it. A calm writer is a good writer. Lol, jk. Knock yourself out! *gives Lion a bottle of Alca(KaW)l
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread (The Story Index) No, KaWdka just sounds better if you say it. IN SOVIET KAW, RUSSIAN TEACH YOU!
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Version 2.0 added. Work still in progress. Contact me here or on my wall if you wish to aid anywhere.
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread I'm actually not busy today! Any stories that need rating? Or correcting?
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread A very important part of the FF constitution! 5) If you post a story on here you must be willing to take criticism. Any writer who attempts to kick someone out of a thread will be subject to [idk]
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread @ Delphin After the sentence: He carried a large menacing lance with a dark satin ribbon tied around the point end. You put a “space” and put Coranthar bowed to the man as he approached…
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Oh I see what you mean. Hmm. What if I changed "him" to "the new arrival"? Or something to that effect.
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread It took me telling u on my alt for u to know what I was talking about lol