Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Plz and ty A lone man in a bare, whitewashed room turned dials and pressed buttons on banks of machinery, causing chemicals to leak into small, square glass containers through various pipes. The glass cubes were lined up on a plain white table. Each cube had a smaller container attached to it by a glass cylinder, sealed in the middle. The smaller cubes each contained a rat. Aside from the table, banks of machinery, and a single metal door, the room was completely empty. The man twisted a few more dials and pressed a button. The gas in one of the cubes changed from a sickly yellow to pale green. A hint of a smile flickered across the man's lips and he wrote something on a piece of paper. He pressed a button and the sealed cylinder connecting the two containers slid open. The pale green gas leaked into the smaller cube and the rat started choking. It's pupils contracted, it began salivating, it convulsed and, finally it died. The man wrote something else on the paper and turned off the machinery. The gases evaporated. It's perfect, the man thought, walking out of the room. The door slammed and locked automatically. Maybe too perfect…
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Besides everything in italics I see no problems Only thoughts should be italicized
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Not true. If it's something from the past or a dream, italics are fine.
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Also could someone tell me which title sounds the best? Blackfire Invisible Death Deadwind Acid rain Darklight
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread I like Invisible Death. It's mysterious and sounds violent! :mrgreen:
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread § Chapter Three § §The Serpentines Prophecy§ Arria My head throbbed,slowly my vision returned. What was I doing here? I thought. Then my memory came flooding back, Queen of The Auras, The Centurion, the ropes, the spell, my name, all of it. Then walked out a tall muscular figure,with short brown hair. That's all I could see,my vision wasn't yet fully recovered. “Why are you hear?” he spoke. “I've come for the Queen.” I said, my voice barely above a whisper. “What Queen?” he asked. “Of the Auras, of course.” I said surprised. “Do you mean,” he said slowly. “Lynet?” I nodded. “LYNET!”he yelled. --------------------{|}---------------------- Cygnus “You've arrived at last,” Cygnus said. “I was beginning to worry about you.Have you brought the items?” he inquired. “Of course Cygnus,everything is beginning to fall into place. Princess Jatoria spotted Arria going into the BlackWood Forest yesterday-” Cygnus cut him off. “Augustus said he saw her going into the passage a little before you got here.” Cygnus said. “Hmm, that means she should've reached them by now.” Crinus said. “Then you know what we must do,right?” Cygnus asked. “It's time to tell Prince Rowan who he really is…but first we must finish the weapons!” Cheese I really need that backstory for the hammer and a small passage about you preparing for WAR!!!
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Hm... Cygnus was once a god himself, then he suffered a blow that was so powerful it made him mortal. Another god, more powerful than he was, took his hammer, and Cygnus tore the hammer from the god's dead hand after giving up his youth for power. For the war thing, make it something like he's forging armor and the spirits of past wars are being absorbed by it. Or something
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread I'm gonna do the nomination thingy, I can nominate myself, right? Description: Lady has been writing ever since she was little and hasn't stopped. She prefers to write fantasy, but will occasionally write realistic fiction. Writing is her passion. Threads: Battle camp: the rebellion Battle camp: the enemy Battle camp: the rescue A Game of Secrets Character Smoothie Shop (not yet created, but it's coming soon!
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Can you add my story? Earth's Heroes Page 1 I may get a link up tomorrow
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread When I get online on Sunday I'll expand the list and add everything else.
Re: KaW Fan Fiction Superthread Constitution vote: Should we change the RP rule for "encouraged not to" into "should not" All in favour say Yay all against say nay