Fading Fast - chat

Lol, I think at least half of the kaw ers are teens

 

I'm 15

 

Cheese I kinda feel like you tries to overdo it. Also the wording was kind of awkward. "It looked like an octopus, only the octopus was inside a glass." You are just off your game today cheese.

 

Yeah... I'm having a brain fart today. Probably becAuse I haven't written in a while

 

That's okay.

 

Well, was the bump good? I thought it was a little too dramatic.

 

?

 

I need to warm up writing.








His skin started to burst, followed by an intense pain. He didn't dare hold it in, or be destroyed himself.
His body disappeared, in it's place a mighty shadow cast by the hideous beast from which it came. The citizens cowered in fear. A little girl looked up.




And screamed.

 

Creepy...

By the bump, I mean part 15 - B.U.M.P.

Please check it out

 

Yeah I read that. That's why I wa commenting on.

 

I thought you were commenting on part 16. You never even mentioned the bump

 

Awww I don't know why im talking about now! Your brain fart is contagious!

 

*someone hears a fart coming from my head* Oh yes it is. -_-

 

I think the use of emoji's got you

 

Bump

 

NEW PART IN FIVE KINUTES

 

Wow, I'm sad now. I should just stop writing the story.

 

Yeah cheese!!!!! She fell off a building!? Lolllll!!!!!