Epic story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xantam (01), Sep 21, 2010.

  1. Ok I want at least 5 yay votes for my char but I don't think or will
    do
    good
    but
    here goes

    name: Antiochus
    race: human of Greek origin
    weapons: pila hoplon shield Short sword and a 10 ft spear
    age:22
    bio: raised by decendants of an ancient race of beings and taught the ways of
    war although rather traditional he still fights very well
    tactics: cover his body with his shield and throw his pila at the enemy then charge head long with a spear into the enemy and the slice them to ribbons
     
  2. Oh and is a soldier lol
     
  3. Last part sounds kinda like sum1 I've heard of… who was it?… oh yea that guy from 300
     
  4. Actually that's how roman legions and hoplites fought I just meshed them together lol
     
  5. Name: Nędza
    Race: Human, of unknown descent.
    Class: Assassin
    Age/Bio: Unknown, mid-20's, Born into a poverty-stricken family, Nędza's mother died several days after giving birth. With no relatives to be found, he was placed in a local orphanage. After one day running away, Nędza then lived on the streets as a common thief until found by a member of a notorious Thieves' Guild. Since then his name has become well known for his skill in the arts of sabotage.


    Weaponry: A steel gauntlent, and a Gladius blade. Also works with explosives.

    Alignment: Villian?
     
  6. Coolz tho I've never heard of that hoplon thing
     
  7. Well right now I've picked some major players I just need a yay or nay on my person lol
     
  8. Spartans did pretty much the same thing they'd overlap each others shields and when the enemy stupidly attacked at the shields the Spartans behind them would spear them or the front line would stab with short swords
     
  9. 3 thumbs up for ur character x-man
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    .....^lol
     
  10. Thanks lol
    @Angusempire also the Greeks(meaning Athenian Spartans thebians corinthians) employed the same tactics called a phalanx the macadonians employed similar tactics but used longer spears and smaller shields the selucids I guess were also Macedonians or apart of the empire at one time did the samething
     
  11. Lol
    sorry Angus empire I
    meant german idiot o_O lol
     
  12. X's character was traditional.... I say he needs something to make his character stand out a bit. Nothing like guns or explosives or anything. Just something that makes him different from all the other spartans
     
  13. He's not Spartan....... He's
    Greek well same thing but read what I said before lol I'll add
    something to him like. A magical shield
    or sword lol
     
  14. YES!!! MAGIC ALWAYS WORKS!!!! XD
     
  15. Lol so is that acceptable
    or should I give him a special ability?
     
  16. Magic weapon or special ability.... Hm.... This is a tough one..... Um..... Well the weapon would make him like the strongest dude throughout the place. But the ability could be something awesome!!! Like entering the matrix and killing everybody in the blink of an eye.... I say you choose :D
     
  17. Well since he was brought up
    by ancient beings of infinint knowladge and not a bunch of magical Faries I'll go with ability taught to him by the ancients so what should it be? The ability to read peoples next moves and intentions or the ability to psych people out and make them rout on the spot hmm tempting both I want a second opinion lol
     
  18. Hm... I say.... BOTH!!!! your guy will be the main character so he needs to e able to do some sick things
     
  19. Name: Kantos
    Race: Elf
    Class: Elemental Wizard
    Gender: Male
    Weapon: Different staff for each element (orange for fire, green for earth, blue for water, and white for air). Each staff can be shrunk to pocket-size for easier potability.
    Bio: Kantos was born and raised in a school of magic. He struggled in every subject except for elements. This just came easy for him. When he turned 18, he left school as top in his elemental class. He made his four staff and went out searching for adventure.
    Age: 25
    Appearence: Slanted eyes and pointed ears, typical elf features. Wears a white robe and black wizards hat. Has a single pocket in his robe where he keeps his staffs.
    Is this good?