Endgame-Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by seth73, Jul 20, 2010.

  1. u shood definitely finish it it's pretty good
     
  2. We needs more Seth. You'll never get anywhere at this rate.
     
  3. Yeah, yeah, I've been working on it, bit by bit, but not enough to make a full post yet.
    Seth
     
  4. New post in the works. should be up in 10 minutes.
     
  5. Hmmmmm............
     
  6. New post.
     
  7. BEST STORY EVA! can I b n it?
     
  8. after posting in it, no way.
     
  9. Sorry Seth, this was probably the worst time to suggest more, especially because that francis guy, or whoever he is posting every freaking where.
     
  10. Didn t read it but... I love the song
     
  11. Haha. I finally got caught up with the story. It's awesome Seth! Took ya' long enough to off me lol. I wonder what happened to my backpack.....
     
  12. Heheh, youll see, in the next post, which I'm working on.
     
  13. It turned into a block of cheese, says I. With a parachute.
     
  14. New post.
     
  15. Yay great job as usual Seth 
     
  16. Thanks :lol:
     
  17. Haha. That was great. Gave me a chuckle. Can't wait for more.
     
  18. Well, my stories are all on my old iPod, so I guess, I'll restart
     
  19. You should col. Your stories are very descriptive and well told. A lot like seth's story, but with a lot more capital letters, lol.