Endgame-Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by seth73, Jul 20, 2010.

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  1. New post.
    Seth
     
    #21 seth73, Jul 22, 2010
  2. It's great. I is wanting moar!
     
    #22 *Irin (01), Jul 22, 2010
  3. Hmmm... To be, or not to be lazy...
     
    #23 seth73, Jul 22, 2010
  4. NOT TO BE LAZY... That means you'll write more, right?
     
    #24 *Irin (01), Jul 22, 2010
  5. Later, I gotta think up what happens first. To the qq club!
     
    #25 seth73, Jul 22, 2010
  6. Nice!!!
     
    #26 mathew057, Jul 22, 2010
  7. So far you pulled off switching the point of view, very well
     
    #27 osterly, Jul 23, 2010
  8. Thanks, wasn't sure how that went.
    Seth
     
    #28 seth73, Jul 23, 2010
  9. The only thing was, I didn't really catch who specifcally it was switched to. I'm going to go read that part again right now.
     
    #29 osterly, Jul 23, 2010
  10. Wait.... I get it now....
     
    #30 osterly, Jul 23, 2010
  11. Yeah I wasn't sure weather I should stay in 1st person or switch to 3rd, but 3rd would be easier to understand, so I went with that.
    Seth
     
    #31 seth73, Jul 23, 2010
  12. What a troublemaker I am..... Lol
     
    #32 osterly, Jul 23, 2010
  13. OH, thats the least of the trouble you'll make.
     
    #33 seth73, Jul 23, 2010
  14. YES. This story is awesome.
     
    #34 osterly, Jul 23, 2010
  15. New post in the works, have some friends coming over, so I'm not sure how much Ill get done today.
     
    #35 seth73, Jul 23, 2010
  16. Almost done the new post.
     
    #36 seth73, Jul 23, 2010
  17. YESSSS!
     
    #37 *Irin (01), Jul 23, 2010
  18. Boyahh!!!!
     
    #38 mathew057, Jul 23, 2010
  19. New post. Last one for the day.
     
    #39 seth73, Jul 23, 2010
  20. Two thumbs up
     
    #40 *Irin (01), Jul 23, 2010
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