Endgame-Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by seth73, Jul 20, 2010.

  1. im addicted



    need rehab





    not 1st time
     
  2. Add Shadowstorm to ur story

    age:13
    hight:5'7"
    wieght:130lbs
    eyes:hazel
    hair:dark brown
    weapons: spirit sword(traps spirits of deafeted foes to give more power; turns into element strong against last atk(ex. hit by fire=water sword))

    mag bombs(disruprts local magnetic field,killing a vertical gravity for a short period of time)

    blades on side of arms and on shins

    abilities: control over shadows

    armor: uses shadows to slow attacks to stop


    suggestion/request for story part: merc that took a job to wipe out seths squad, they show evidence that his imployer did something bad. tgen joins seths squad and helps
     
  3. Ill take sstgs post as a yes so ill make one u dont hae to use him(duh) unless u get a good spot

    name:

    hair:brown

    eyes:eek:ne blu one green ill let u decide y:p

    weapons:metal staff-blade at one end, and two old fasioned revolvers:D

    armor: light kevilar(however u say it) jacket, and steel-toed boots

    extras: wears everyday street clothes under armor, very untrusting, hates folowing orders from ppl who havent earned it, and finds it hard to sit idle

    hope thats good:D
     
  4. I frogot name:0 lol insert ordo:p
     
  5. Guys I'm not accepting characters right now.
     
  6. Kk soz for assuming:D
     
  7. Seth I demand you post more of the story.......

    PRETTY PLEASE
     
  8. The plots a bit of a cliche what with them getting trapped in a real video game and if they die in the game they die in real life and you have to play until the end to get out. when r u going to start killing off characters?
     
  9. I've already killed off quite a few.
    And I make it up as a go doomkid.
    Seth
     
  10. tell me of ur interested in another character
     
  11. i have the perfect character i think
     
  12. No ain't nobody bumping nothing.
    Seth
     
  13. And once again, I AM NOT looking for more characters.
    Seth
     
  14. Some people don't get it do they? They see one post on a page then don't read amy further.
     
  15. i mean if u ever need another one at any time
     
  16. Aghhhhhh iwas so happy when i saw that more had been written on endgame but so sad when it was a random person making bad comments:(
     
  17. SETH!!!! Write more
     
  18. I might work on it tonight. Not sure though.
    Seth