Echo's Secret Life FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 19, 2012.

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  1. 
     
    #21 koolmade, Jan 23, 2012
  2. Chapter 8 is posted :)
     
    #22 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 23, 2012
  3. Chapter 8 is wonderful! I love it.

    Just one thing. Check your punctuation at some points, but even that's rare.

    Love it, keep in writing. You're an amazing author.
     
    #23 Lil_Tiger, Jan 23, 2012
  4. Make her a vampire :D
     
    #24 koolmade, Jan 24, 2012
  5.  Way to not be a twihard! It's nice to see a vampire story that's not completely centered around cliché undying love.
     
    #25 *iPimella (01), Jan 25, 2012
  6. taco
     
    #26 d_bo_assassin, Jan 25, 2012
  7. I have run out of ideas for NOW. I promise I will start Echo's Secret Life Book 2 when I get a new idea. For the time being WALL me if I should start a new story I've thought of and started to write in my iPod Notes.
     
    #27 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 25, 2012
  8.  good story 
     
    #28 koolmade, Jan 26, 2012
  9. bad story. I almost puked
     
    #29 d_bo_assassin, Jan 26, 2012
  10. When does book 2 come out ?
     
    #30 Idontexist, Jan 26, 2012
  11. @assassin ur just jealous cuz u can't write a good story 
     
    #31 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 26, 2012
  12. What is the second book?
     
    #32 -_Fang_-, Jan 27, 2012
  13. Echo's Secret Life: A Choice to Make
     
    #33 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 27, 2012
  14. silver and [/color=gold] gold [/color]
     
    #34 Renatum, Jan 27, 2012
  15. gold * oops :|
     
    #35 Renatum, Jan 27, 2012
  16. I'm not mad. I know I can't write a book. I freely admit that. nor do I care less about that.

    you obviously can't write either. just read that filth
     
    #36 d_bo_assassin, Jan 27, 2012
  17. Ur jealous. Admit it. Cuz everyone else who reads it likes it 
     
    #37 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 27, 2012
  18. cuz it's likely those who may have read it are just as mistaken and emo just like you.
     
    #38 d_bo_assassin, Jan 27, 2012
  19. Sorry I'm no emo :)
     
    #39 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Jan 28, 2012
  20. you're in denial. you have no writing future. you're wasting your time.
     
    #40 d_bo_assassin, Jan 28, 2012
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