Dragon Tale

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Utho (01), Jul 9, 2010.

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  1. Bumping this for new people. I'm gonna leave KaW soon so I want any new feedback before I go.

    First time I've ever bumped a story most likely the last
     
    #41 *Utho (01), Aug 31, 2010
  2. Bump
     
    #42 *Valakaras (01), Oct 2, 2010
  3. this story is aloud to b bumped to keep alive!!
     
    #43 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Oct 2, 2010
  4. Of course since everyone knows that DT is the best story ever.
     
    #44 *Valakaras (01), Oct 2, 2010
  5. Now this is what a fan fic topic should look like
     
    #45 xl007, Oct 2, 2010
  6. Time for you guys to read a real story.
     
    #46 *Valakaras (01), Oct 2, 2010
  7. Bump
     
    #47 *Valakaras (01), Oct 5, 2010
  8. Bump again
     
    #48 *Valakaras (01), Oct 8, 2010
  9. Bump
     
    #49 TheSilverPanda, Oct 8, 2010
  10. bump
     
    #50 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Oct 8, 2010
  11. DT bump
     
    #51 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Oct 9, 2010
  12. Bump
     
    #52 THEBlade, Oct 9, 2010
  13. Bump
     
    #53 *29madden (01), Oct 11, 2010
  14. Bumpers
     
    #54 *Valakaras (01), Oct 12, 2010
  15. bump
     
    #55 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Oct 15, 2010
  16. Pump bump!
     
    #56 TheSilverPanda, Oct 16, 2010
  17. read it all

    long live utho
     
    #57 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Oct 16, 2010
  18. bump
     
    #58 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Oct 29, 2010
  19. This is actually really good:) A few thoughts, try to make it more serious, it kind of has a humorous aura around it. Go into way more deatail in the chapters, and eliminate some modern phrases. With a little work, you could publish this;)
     
    #59 *Commando-07 (01), Oct 30, 2010
  20. utho is gone now. quit. but dragon tale is probaly the best story in fan fiction

    few others. realy realy good
     
    #60 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Oct 30, 2010
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