Dragon Tale Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Utho (01), Jul 9, 2010.

  1. You made falcon a character but not me? :( now I am GlooMi. Jk  btw your up next for l'malar whol kestal
     
  2. Great job though I <3 your plot
     
  3. Haha yes im the dragon of a Mage Trainee!
     
  4. You're not really that stern though falc lol
     
  5. No i AM stern! You sure you wanna argue with me?
     
  6. Yep *pokes falcons tummy*
     
  7. GRRRRRRAAAAA!!!!!!!Thou shalll not Live Anymore!!!!Death to GlooMi
     
  8. *blows out candle that falcon is using as his fire* be careful you might burn yourself
     
  9. AAAAAAAHHHHH
     
  10. Hey! Stern Dragon, take this outside lol. :lol:
     
  11. Lol i thought you had to go.
     
  12. He isn't but bjhorn continue your demon chronicles story!
     
  13. why not bjorn?
     
  14. Cuz I want Utho to read it first
     
  15. this is utho (alt)
     
  16. Oh u read new chap
     
  17. I enjoyed the story very much you kept things flowing and didn't get sidetrack to change the story I give it 2 thumbs up