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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Utho (01), Jul 9, 2010.

  1. Nightmare whoopsey lol. It's my story that I made. U should read it. It's in the fan fiction forum
     
  2. Awsome!!!!!!!!!!part two part two!!!!!
     
  3. YES!!!!! Love the part where psycho dies  one question....what happened to the other son? The one that was kidnapped? Is he still sitting in the cave going" crap it's dark in here. Hope they get here soon". Just wondering.
     
  4. THAT'S ME AT THE END EVERY1. YAH DEMONS ARE AWESOME.

    LOL I SHARP STICKS THEY CALL SWORDS


    THE DEMONS WILL RULEAGAIN
     
  5. Cool I'm a demon awesome thought it would be about freeing the dragons and that's it awesome!!!
     
  6. and me will rule the earth HAHA
     
  7. The first part was about saving dragons. Now our heroes discover a much greater evil...lol. And LOL @ Bam
     
  8. Utho when the second part coming out?
     
  9. Couple days then I'll get back to my daily schedule.
     
  10. Tuesday probably
     
  11. Seriously I think someone should check the cave. That kids probably starving by now lol. Otherwise great story utho.  good job ( 'cept for that damn kid. Sorry it's buggin me)
     
  12. Seriously I think someone should check the cave. That kids probably starving by now lol. Otherwise great story utho.  good job ( 'cept for that damn kid. Sorry it's buggin me)
     
  13. Lol bam. He was saved. I forgot about him lol. Thanks for finding holes in the story...
     
  14. I think Psychos other son should be Universal Emperor and rises to conquer the world

    Of course Bams right, gotta find him first lol
     
  15. Dudes I'm leader of demons I'll kill the dragons and utho!!!
     
  16. Ur chap is up utho
     
  17. Utho, you know I have complete love and mad respect for you...but how could you kill off my wicked awesome father with his great looks, perfect hair, charming personality, and humble attitude? Who do you think will play him when this hits the big screen? Maybe we can find a Johnny Depp, Harrison Ford, Tom Cruise, Jack Nicholson, Robert DeNiro, Matt Damon, Al Pacino, Clint Eastwood, Samuel L Jackson, Sean Connery, and can tell stories like Morgan Freeman hybrid?

    PS can I keep the throne?

    PSS and not the weird Tom Cruise we have today. The one from Top Gun

    PSSS anyword on my brother?
     
  18. Lol josher
     
  19. Ur bro is safe and sound. And I wanted to make it dramatic. And psy has too big of an ego to keep him alive lol