Dragon Tale Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Utho (01), Jul 9, 2010.

  1. Chapter 4 is up guys!
     
  2. Hey man where the hell am i? Lol
    Ill get poncho to attack you!!!
     
  3. Chapter 5 is up
     
  4. Must have more...
     
  5. How about an old wise sage to help them? Anyway it's a great story! Maybe needs a girl? But yeah GREAT. Try to get it published. If u do I will buy it.
     
  6. Yeah ill add stuff in
     
  7. Lol utho. I love reading it so far really wondering how chapter 6 is going to be.. Be gentle
     
  8. Dont worry cans lol. U'll like it....
     
  9. Nice chaper need more...
     
  10. Paitence Matt patience...a chapter a day is all I can whip out
     
  11. I know I just I am waiting on all these storys to take place so I have alot of free time
     
  12. Chapter 7 is up!
     
  13. I personally love the new character Dani  Great story Utho 
     
  14. This is like a mini more awesome Eragon book.
     
  15. I am going to kill someone in Les then three second and who ever post after me will die
     
  16. THE CITY OF FLAVA!!!

    Great job utho!!
     
  17. Chapter 8 is up!
     
  18. New chapter is cool but let me guess utho wants a bow instead hmm??
     
  19. U'll see next chapter lol. Next chapter is probably one of the most important chapters in the whole story