Dragon Tale 2 Feedback thread

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Utho (01), Jul 1, 2011.

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  1. Hey utho That other story. I can't remember the name but u wrote it
     
    #21 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Jul 6, 2011
  2. According to my notes...

    Blackwind
     
    #22 *iPimella (01), Jul 6, 2011
  3. Yea. Can any1 bump it?
     
    #23 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Jul 6, 2011
  4. Notes?

    *BEEP!*

    Creeper alert
     
    #24 *Utho (01), Jul 6, 2011
  5. And I'll post a chap tomorrow
     
    #25 *Utho (01), Jul 6, 2011
  6. Utho can u find blackwind?
     
    #26 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Jul 6, 2011
  7. I couldn't find it. Besides... I have other stories. Like Selen's Mansion which I started today
     
    #27 *Utho (01), Jul 6, 2011
  8. Utho I have notes because my cousin gave me her iPod and gave me an hour long lecture on KaW, specifically FF
     
    #28 *iPimella (01), Jul 6, 2011
  9. Hour long lecture? Lolz. What she say about me?

    "Now this Utho dude. He's pro. Just like...awesome. Don't mess with Utho."

    Lolz I'm modest
     
    #29 *Utho (01), Jul 6, 2011
  10. No, she just said you wrote Dragon Tale, L'malar Whol Kestal, and Blackwind around the same times as she wrote NLH, but left after like chapter 5ish of Blackwind
     
    #30 *iPimella (01), Jul 6, 2011
  11. That's it? Not,

    "Such a beast that kid is"

    "I wanna be just like him"
     
    #31 *Utho (01), Jul 6, 2011
  12. Nope 
     
    #32 *iPimella (01), Jul 6, 2011
  13. Chapter 4 posted!

    Be sure to check out Selen's Mansion too!
     
    #33 *Utho (01), Jul 6, 2011
  14. ༄Hmm... Good chapter... But couldn't Chaz have sensed the arrow and instead used a spell or blocked the bolt with his armor? Just wondering, curiosity always bests me lol.༄

    iZaln
     
    #34 Nlaz, Jul 6, 2011
  15. Sensed The bolt? He's a Dragon Knight Zaln...not a magic ninja.

    And how else would I have this dramatic effect?
     
    #35 *Utho (01), Jul 6, 2011
  16. Lol, well if he's managed to stay alive long enough. But I forgot, drama exists xD

    iZaln
     
    #36 Nlaz, Jul 6, 2011
  17. Yes. And York is not a main character. Those not mains get killed a lot in my stories
     
    #37 *Utho (01), Jul 6, 2011
  18. Jeez I would've seen that coming :p
     
    #38 PrincessElf, Jul 6, 2011
  19. Thanks utho haha could've at least put a butterfly in so I would be distracted while it came lmao
     
    #39 PrincessElf, Jul 6, 2011
  20. The darkmages should win 
     
    #40 Eagleking, Jul 6, 2011
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