"Dragon Fire" Feedback, Discussion, etc.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Nov 21, 2010.

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  1. Rolf...sorry about that.

    Anyway...good twist with the story. I'm... egg-cited to see where this goes.
    Sorry...couldn't resist.
     
    #41 *Irin (01), Nov 23, 2010
  2. It was am eggcenlet chap
     
    #42 *chris54657 (01), Nov 23, 2010
  3. That's why I egg-zactly hate puns.

    iZaln
     
    #43 Nlaz, Nov 23, 2010
  4. Damn eggsget in my belly
     
    #44 german_idiot, Nov 23, 2010
  5. Lmao Irin. And off to read the 1st chap now 
     
    #45 jptate12, Nov 23, 2010
  6. i loved it you have natural writing skills and i feel honored to be chosen
     
    #46 KyleBrowning, Nov 23, 2010
  7. Thanks Kyle, Drayhon Racect. Lolz.

    iZaln
     
    #47 Nlaz, Nov 23, 2010
  8. lol ize gotz a dragon
     
    #48 KyleBrowning, Nov 23, 2010
  9. i love tge detail on my hair roflmao
     
    #49 KyleBrowning, Nov 23, 2010
  10. Excelent first part, looking forwards to more.
    Seth
     
    #50 seth73, Nov 23, 2010
  11. Thanks Seth. And you like the gleaming blonde-ness, Kyle? Lmao.

    iZaln
     
    #51 Nlaz, Nov 23, 2010
  12. It'll be Intresting how you incorporate the dwarves into it.
    Seth
     
    #52 seth73, Nov 23, 2010
  13. Actually I made an ingenious thing for them when I was taking a dump today.

    iZ
     
    #53 Nlaz, Nov 23, 2010
  14. So.........u get ur ideas from taking a crap on toilets............THAT'S BRILLIANT
     
    #54 german_idiot, Nov 23, 2010
  15. Lol, well zaln, i cant say how much i enjoyed it, u did a miraculous job. I wish my chapters could be longer like that.
     
    #55 Marodo, Nov 23, 2010
  16. @German
    Believe, it's amazing how you can storyboard in that undisturbed utopia.

    @Mar
    Haha, I spent a whole day of typing on my computer.

    iZaln
     
    #56 Nlaz, Nov 23, 2010
  17. Awsome. It better not involve plungers
    Seth
     
    #57 seth73, Nov 23, 2010
  18. No, it's a rather good one considering the fact I was taking a crap.

    iZaln
     
    #58 Nlaz, Nov 23, 2010
  19. Who the hell is Mylene?!! Lol
    But nice start. Love how well u described me. Woulda bin better tho if u said that u fancied me or had a massive bo-ner right then lol
     
    #59 Croluxian, Nov 23, 2010
  20. ... Lol cro
     
    #60 *iPimella (01), Nov 23, 2010
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