"Dragon Fire" Feedback, Discussion, etc.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Nov 21, 2010.

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  1. This is very much like the Inheritence Cycle (Eragon books). But it's not badly written, might be a little easy to predict what will happen if u have read those books, but not bad iZaln, not bad at all 
     
    #21 jptate12, Nov 22, 2010
  2. Well u get a German thumb up approval.............well don't know if that counts for anything
     
    #22 german_idiot, Nov 22, 2010
  3. Thanks guys. And believe me, although it will soooo frikin bear a similarity to The Inheritance series, I have already plotted things out to be different, but the first two or three paragraphs are similar to Eragon's . I swear it will be different later on, but there may be similarities along the way.

    iZaln
     
    #23 Nlaz, Nov 22, 2010
  4. Looks great so far Zaln can't wait to see what you do with it.
    Seth
     
    #24 seth73, Nov 22, 2010
  5. Don't worry zaln I never read those books
     
    #25 german_idiot, Nov 22, 2010
  6. Dude looked at the carators that are gonna be in the story it's gonna be a good story man
     
    #26 *chris54657 (01), Nov 22, 2010
  7. Planning to get chapter 1 up soon

    iZ
     
    #27 Nlaz, Nov 22, 2010
  8. Sorrey about befor again misjuged it's gonna be a great story zaln
     
    #28 *chris54657 (01), Nov 22, 2010
  9. I dont mind. This is heavily somewhat based on the inheritance i guess. its all fine.

    iZaln
     
    #29 Nlaz, Nov 22, 2010
  10. I'm sure they r Chris but just saying that since I never read those eragon books I'm not gonna notice any similarities btween the two lol
     
    #30 german_idiot, Nov 22, 2010
  11. lmfao now thats funny XD

    iZ ^^
     
    #31 Nlaz, Nov 22, 2010
  12. Oh, and both of you guys can sign up if you'll wanna.

    iZaln
     
    #32 Nlaz, Nov 22, 2010
  13. I wasn't invited...

    Good job anyway. Love your writing.
     
    #33 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 22, 2010
  14. Sure man will do
     
    #34 german_idiot, Nov 22, 2010
  15. TJ! I forgot... I preferred the name Eomer, so thats how i would easily remember you by. But nonetheless, you aswell are invited to sign up. Sowwies.

    iZaln
     
    #35 Nlaz, Nov 22, 2010
  16. Eomer...type in Eomer_champion_of_rohan

    my alt

    Thx I'll sign up

    Aight 
     
    #36 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 22, 2010
  17. I can sigh up
     
    #37 *chris54657 (01), Nov 22, 2010
  18. Chapter 1: The Egg Bearers has been posted on the story thread!!!!

    iZaln
     
    #38 Nlaz, Nov 23, 2010
  19. Excellent chapter. Or should I say... egg-cellent. Nah, nevermind. Bad pun.
     
    #39 *Irin (01), Nov 23, 2010
  20. Boo on irins pun
    yay on chapter
     
    #40 german_idiot, Nov 23, 2010
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