"Dragon Fire" Feedback, Discussion, etc.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Nlaz, Nov 21, 2010.

  1. Um. Eragon much? It's almost identical...u just changed names. You need to have a solid stream of separate ideas and twists that are unlike Eragon. You need an evil character....someone to change the odds. An "unknown and unseen" foe.
     
  2. How far did you read into it?

    iZaln
     
  3. That should cause some red lights to go off Zaln. Originality is appreciated 
     
  4. Cool ya jets lol.

    iZ
     
  5. My jets? I am not a jacuzzi, an airport, or a jetpack 
     
  6. ...I'll hold back on this one xD

    iZ
     
  7. Ah new chapter up.

    iZaln
     
  8. Love the new chapter. Especially liked the sparring.
     
  9. Ah thanks lol. Took two days worth o time... Gosh I'm getting rusty lol.

    iZaln
     
  10. Rusty? What d'you mean?
     
  11. Eh that chapter doesn't have the same feel as the others do lol. But maybe that's just me.

    iZ
     
  12. Was it supposed to have the same feel? It was good either way.
    But don't ask me about writing stuff right now. I'm going to fall over any second now.
     
  13. Wait! I will just to make you fall xD!

    iZ
     
  14. Which is better in writing, metaphors or similes?

    iZaln
     
  15. Depends. They both have the same purpose: comparing things. Similes use like or as, so I guess it depends on the writer. metaphors tend to be more thought out while similes can be brilliant when used with tact.

    Now what about me falling over?
     
  16. Didn't you say that you'd fall over if you answered a writing question lol?

    iZaln
     
  17. Shouldn't you know not to trust me when I'm in a fall-over state?
     
  18. Depends whether you're drunk or sick haha.

    iZaln
     
  19. Neither. Just so incredibly tired that I can't think straight.

    Is you a vampire?