Downfall Of Darkness ~ Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 4, 2011.

  1. It's awesome :) Maybe I should say "fantastic" or "wonderful" instead? Well, it doesn't matter, as they are all true :)
    I LOVED the tomato-part. I think I laughed a BIT too much at that xD
     
  2. Amazing Story, Mech! Too bad I can't keep up with it much. I'm only on GaW these days. :(
    Though I love my character! :):):):):):)
     
  3. Sorry for all the hold up. I have so much happening, I can't find time to write.

    I'll try write up some stuff soon!
     
  4. Hey guys, it's me again. And I am finally back with a new chapter of this!
    Sorry for the long long wait!
     
  5. Yay! New chapter! Awesome as always :)
     
  6. Oh yeah, a new chapter :D
    I liked the end a lot. It was funny :)
    Of course, the entire chapter was AWESOME :D
    It's great that you're writing again :)
     
  7. The next chapter will be released in separate parts, due to terrible upcoming events for our resistance group.

    I won't be doing this often, but when it happens, it's really important.

    This seems rushed, but 14 part 1 is up!
     
  8. Where do we find this?
     
  9. Look further down the list...
     
  10. Updated! Again... And nobody's reading...
     
  11. Yet again, an awesome chapter :D
     
  12. I left my thoughts on the thread
     
  13. DJ. Remove your CoS tag.

    And please, don't troll Fanfic. It's a serious place.
     
  14. Where's Feather when we actually need him to flip out on people?! xD

    Loved the chapter! Gah more please?

    Please?
     
  15. I love this story. If this were a book I would reread like 20 times xD
     
  16. After I'm done, I'm editing it and submitting it to my English teacher. •~•