Downfall Of Darkness ~ Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 4, 2011.

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  1. When I checked forums I went from. •~• to ^_^ to \(^-^)/
     
    #41 *FlareEXE (01), Nov 15, 2011
  2. Oh, right. I forgot to post this.




    NEW CHAPTA GUISE
     
    #42 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 15, 2011
  3. Very good at leaving me wanting more ._.
     
    #43 Allioss, Nov 15, 2011
  4. I agree with Beria!
    You are a master at describing, especially emotions.
    Awesome job! :D
     
    #44 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 15, 2011
  5. A-MAZING! This is so good, I can't give feedback... It's just to awesome!
     
    #45 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 16, 2011
  6. Awsome
     
    #46 *webs (01), Nov 16, 2011
  7. Hey guys, It's that time of the week again!


    A new chapter is up!
     
    #47 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 19, 2011
  8. I have run out of words to describe this story, so that means...
    I HAVE TO MAKE UP MY OWN WORDS!
    OMGWTFBBQSAUCE; this is amazing as usual :D
     
    #48 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 19, 2011
  9. :)

    Thanks Plano!
    Dammit.
    Plano
    Plano
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    Plano

    FRICKIN AUTO CORRECT.

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    #49 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 19, 2011
  10. Hahah, you're welcome :)
     
    #50 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 19, 2011
  11. I award this story a total of 24 out of 10 stars
     
    #51 Allioss, Nov 19, 2011
  12. Thank you all!
     
    #52 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 19, 2011
  13. It's back again peoples!
     
    #53 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 19, 2011
  14. Lol I'm comic relief
     
    #54 *FlareEXE (01), Nov 20, 2011
  15. It's so AWESOME. You set a mood, you describe, there's practically no mistakes...
    I LOVE YOU
     
    #55 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 20, 2011
  16. Actually I did make a mistake!


    It was supposed to say "tight around the stomach and flows from the hips down."
     
    #56 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 20, 2011
  17. and........



    Thanks!
     
    #57 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 20, 2011
  18. Hi all!


    Guess what's back?



    It's another chapter!
     
    #58 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 21, 2011
  19. This chapter gets INFINITY in awesomeness, though I can't do that sign with my iPod xD
    Great chapter, anyway :D
     
    #59 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 21, 2011
  20. ^~^
     
    #60 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 21, 2011
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