Downfall Of Darkness ~ Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 4, 2011.

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  1. Oooh, I like it :)
    You described the atmosphere very well and Yana's emotions too. I wonder if Crystal and A(don't remember) will break her out...
    Just an all-around awesome story :)
     
    #21 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 10, 2011
  2. :)

    Thanks
     
    #22 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 10, 2011
  3. Yay ^_^ a new chapter and it's good
     
    #23 *FlareEXE (01), Nov 10, 2011
  4. Continuing to love it!
     
    #24 Allioss, Nov 11, 2011
  5. I like it, havent been on in a while, so its nice to come back to a chapter.
     
    #25 matzah, Nov 11, 2011
  6. ^Same.
    The second I came back on... BAM! The two chapters I missed were read.

    I love it! continue with the frequent updates!
     
    #26 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 11, 2011
  7. I'm in it already 
     
    #27 mrTacos2503, Nov 11, 2011
  8. Chapter 4 up!


    Ideas are just flowing like a river through my head =D
     
    #28 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 12, 2011
  9. Don't u love it when that happens cuz i do. More chapters more frequently
     
    #29 *FlareEXE (01), Nov 12, 2011
  10. Oh no! When it says "body owner", I meant "body odor"


    :|
     
    #30 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 12, 2011
  11. Shows my reading skill I just read it as body odor (/).-)
     
    #31 *FlareEXE (01), Nov 12, 2011
  12. ...

    :eek:
     
    #32 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 12, 2011
  13. But I just do that sometimes some body miss spells or puts in the wrong term or uses a different word and I just read it so it sounds right
     
    #33 *FlareEXE (01), Nov 12, 2011
  14. I LOVE it! Continue the AMAZING ******* WORK!
     
    #34 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 12, 2011
  15. Your descriptive ability is amazing.
    Keep it up with the awesome chapters!
     
    #35 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 13, 2011
  16. You updated it! YES!

    AMA-FRIKKIN-ZING!
     
    #36 RenamedPhoenix, Nov 13, 2011
  17. Yay ^_^
     
    #37 *FlareEXE (01), Nov 13, 2011
  18. Sorry for short chapter five.

    ^~^
     
    #38 lIlIlIlI-CoS-NiTRO-IlIlIlIl, Nov 13, 2011
  19. A littles better than nothing •~•
     
    #39 *FlareEXE (01), Nov 13, 2011
  20. ^ Agreed :)
    Great chapter, as usual :D
     
    #40 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Nov 14, 2011
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