Buckeye, our noob weeder position is currently filled. If you would like, we can notify you if the current noob weeder retires (which isn't likely, d_bo enjoys his job).
Pandamonia, you must have expected my arrival. I will say that it is somewhat confusing, even with thinking. You simply haven't given enough to base anything off anything. Also, FanFic is repeatedly recovering, each time gaining a new writer, and sometimes gaining some nubs, who D_Bo quickly scares away. Being on FanFic since about a month after it was made, I should know this.
Ive been here for 2 years, I would know also Cheese. The reason I told you is down to fact that for all intents and purposes I cannot really be added to have a wit battle. If you understand from later chapters, you'll understand. If you don't, well. Get someone else to tell you. Not my problem if people don't like the way I write. I care about the constructive criticism. So perhaps instead of just being a noob with nothing better to do than say 'This is rubbish'. Use your mind and think 'This story could be improved by...' Your points about italics have been taken into account, revising the story now... ๎ Rant concluded...๎