If some people could give me at least two demons that would be great. Since this fanfic community isn't the biggest, maybe you could make more than one. Btw I need some people who are the classical "good people" who are just badass and etc, like Zaln in Alantric: Unknown.
Dude, Veteran to Newbie, stop referencing everything back to Atlantric. It makes you seem like a dickhead and a semi-Stora's pet. No offense. BRANCH OUT FRIEND! BRANCH OUT!
I actually said I am a kiss up to Stora- you were there during that CC discussion, were you not? Lol. Well so far that's the only "nearly complete" story that I've read...
Read School Drama and Kingdoms at War Chronicles: Battle of Gold if you need help with bad ass characters.
I just read the drama school thing, and I'm anticipating the next book. Will James just walk over to Callia and knock her ******* brains out? That would be the sensible thing to do.
Zeral'gurun Demon Obelisk (neutral, not fighting for anyone) Age: unknown Appearance: Zeral'gurun is a true colossus by all means. He stands at a massive 40 feet tall, made completely of obsidian, streaked with blood-red lines of energy. His head is in the center of his chest, he has no horns, and when angry, he glows crimson. Bio: Zeral'gurun was designed as a Demonic war machine, meant specifically for conquest and defense. Unfortunately, he was created using the now-forbidden dark magic the Demons once used. Zeral'gurun quickly developed a personality and became very powerful. In the first Demon War, Zeral'gurun defeated the attacking Demon Lord, and by the Demon Code, was granted his power. Now ancient, wise and powerful, Zeral'gurun wanders the land, waiting for yet another Demon War. Weapons: Zeral'gurun has two weapons. The first being his truly immense strength, and the second being his ability to control dark energies around him. (Feel free to use this however you want) Voice: His voice sounds almost exactly like logs cracking in a fire, but with very noticeable words. FEEDBACK: You use "I" too much
Well how else would I (lol) express myself in first person? Also, I mainly need demons to put into the group that you saw in the prologue. Thanks for the signup, he'll be fun to put in.
PUT. HIM. IN. Please? And I isn't always the best thing. Try using something like... "I blah blah'd into the room, eating a cheesecake. My friend Akdowb was imploding sideways, wiring a helicopter." Instead of: "I ate a cheesecake. I exploded. I did this. I did that." Try to make outside events a little more noticed, it adds depth.
Yah. The first story that I haven't finished yet was more or less a warm up. Also, I wouldn't let that artistic work of art of a character go to waste!
Name: Saradthe Age: Unknown Race: Demon Appearance: Black like night and is slightly taller than an average man. though no one except other demons, knows exactly what he looks like because he seems blends in with the scenery. He has three claws on each hand. Each one is black/red and curved. Scars run all over him. He gives off a cool/dark aura. When ever he's angry his eyes glow orange and his body lights up like flames. Personality: Cold, distant, quiet, deadly. Voice: Very deep and low Weapons: His claws, and he can create/control fire.(He can only do it when he's angry)