Darkness Ascending Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Jan 12, 2011.

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  1. is chapter 2 too short?
    i used to be dissapointed in the short chapters in maximum ride books (there r like 125 chaoters in each book cuz most of them r about 2 pages long!) and now im writing short chapters...
    IM A HYPOCRITE DEAL WITH IT lol
    note to self: wen my characters r cranky im cranky too lol
     
    #61 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 1, 2011
  2. Lol nah not really
     
    #62 FeatherHunter, Mar 1, 2011
  3. lol it looks short on forums and its only 1 and a half pages long in microsoft word D: *makes the title of chapter 2 bigger so it looks longer* thts better ^_^ lol
     
    #63 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 1, 2011
  4. Lmao
     
    #64 FeatherHunter, Mar 1, 2011
  5. Awesome book! really good! And im not just postimg so you will not bite me! Ok thats kinda part of it....
     
    #65 Hang_You_By_Your_Toes, Mar 1, 2011
  6. lol
    dont worry.
    u r safe from being bitten.
    but i might still nom ur soul.... o_O
     
    #66 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 1, 2011
  7. NO! not ma soul! Wait......HA! i noms by own soul!
     
    #67 Hang_You_By_Your_Toes, Mar 1, 2011
  8. u cannot noms ur soul
    u is not a SoulNommer
    u has no SoulTummy
    i is only SoulNommer left after the great war between SoulNommers and Alienz
     
    #68 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 1, 2011
  9. fine! *graps random person* EAT MY SOUL FOOL!
     
    #69 Hang_You_By_Your_Toes, Mar 1, 2011
  10. *noms the random person's soul* ewww tastes like mustard and pomegranate :?
    *the person runs away screaming*
    ...ur next....o_O
     
    #70 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 1, 2011
  11. Im outa ideas
     
    #71 Hang_You_By_Your_Toes, Mar 1, 2011
  12. if u agree to my slave i might not nom ur soul and u (might) be spared wen i take over the world....


    WHO WANTS TO HEAR MY OFFICIAL WORLD DOMINATION RANT? :D
     
    #72 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 1, 2011
  13. Nice!!!! Love it still

    Hmm I think I've heard it a bunch of times..
     
    #73 *pinkpesi (01), Mar 2, 2011
  14. Ya u have lol
    And i dun feel like sayung it again
    Maybe tomorrow i'll male a pic
    For it! Lol
     
    #74 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 2, 2011
  15. *make
     
    #75 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 2, 2011
  16. Excellente! I wish you'd post more often though so the story can be a bit more... understandable? Still liked it though!
     
    #76 *Kimber03 (01), Mar 2, 2011
  17. I dont like rushing in my story. Im taking my time cuz i want it to be perfect, and my writing sucks if i rush and stuff
     
    #77 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 2, 2011
  18. Reg... It's such a good story! I can't wait for Chapter Three. I luffz it. You deserve a scone.
     
    #78 Aphroditia, Mar 4, 2011
  19. Thx!
    I DO deserve a scone...


    But my lazy slaves wont get one for me 

    *points at random dude*
    HEY! U! GO BRING ME A SCONE!!!
    *guy runs away from the crazy girl*
    YA U BETTER RUN, PLANT! (inside joke)
     
    #79 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 4, 2011
  20. *is still waiting for scone...*
    ....sigh
     
    #80 lIIIl__Reg-MidgetTerror__IllII, Mar 4, 2011
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