and my name isnt Cinderfur its Cinderpelt and i dont like being called that cant you see my huge signature on my posts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everyone includding betle is now banned from thias thread you arent suposssed to post anything other than the story here
I'm sorry but this is just terrible, your chapters are more like a 3 line long sentance on a piece of paper, you steal the discriptions of chacaters from actual books, your grammer is terrible and you have not detail the plot at all in about 4 chapters. Overall I give this book a very bad review.....oh hey look! I wrote a very short chapter like in your "book"
ya pureblood clan cat tigerstar was pureblood too. now where is he? the dark forest. u should go join him
Get out of this thread all of you?? But there's only one of me?? Oh the 13 on the end of my name must have confused you! It doesn't mean there's 13 of me! It's just that 13 is my favorite number so I put it at the end of my name...omg look!!<----it's another paragraph as long as your chapters i could write a book!