"Colors" Roses are Red, Violets are Blue. Trees are Green, Ive tried em too. Clouds are White, sky's were Gray Rain is clear just like my pain. Scars are Pink, my heart is Black Horizons bleak, how dark is that? Cautious Yellow, dangerous Red Im now Blue from things you've said. Cheap is Silver, rich is Gold. Skin is White from which Im told! My past is dull but future's bright my aura shines of neon lights! No more rain. A rainbow mornin 2 tone Blue and Dayglo Orange. From Cali rocks and Khaki sand From Florida to Afghanistan from New Zealand to Japan in every man, our blood is Red.
You mean the American English way? Does using the English English way trump the American English way?
Put together something good and has a positive message, and the trolls argue about grammar. Lovely. Thanks a lot, guys.
Lmao. You posted in an ATA forum. What did you expect? This isn't the DPS, we are only good at arguing and pointing out meaningless things, not critiquing poetry
That's not entirely true, I was exceptionally good at critiquing poetry in school. Ps. Having read it through for the first time. It's good mate well done
Nice. And i was generalizing lol. But it is a good poem bud. Very provocative. Captures both the good and the pain that come with being different or perceived differently.